Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 170
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“She’s truly a miracle worker,” Taylor said with a proud smile.
I raised my brows at him and then glanced at the doctor.
“I don’t believe we’ve met,” I told her, my voice starting to come back fully as I took another larger slp
of water.
She blushed and gave me a small smile.
“I’m Doctor Elizabeth Pierce. You can call me Eliza though because I know you are close to Taylor and the Alpha.”
I glanced at Taylor, giving him a perplexed look.
“She knows that you are working for Gavin,” he admitted. “And that you’re moving into his mansion.
“And why does she know this?” I asked, already knowing the answer, but wanting to hear it from him.
“Because Eliza is my mate,” he explained.
I glanced at her, and she was looking at him with a proud smile. She looked like she was in her early 30s, maybe even late 20s.
“She’s also the best doctor in the world,” he continued. “She’s the leading doctor in his hospital and travels frequently. She just got back after being away for 2 weeks.”
“I’ll be around for a while,” she assured him. “I’m not due to leave anytime soon unless there’s another emergency that requires me. Which isn’t likely.”
I smiled at their interaction; they were cute together. Perhaps she could be a friend; I could use another one of those, especially if I was going to be living in the Silver Crescent pack.
Nan was going to lose her mind when I told her this; Iwasn’t going to keep this from her. She was my best friend, and she deserved to know what was going on in my life; it was time that I confessed some things to her. Besides, it’s not like I’d be able to hide the fact that I’m living with Gavin Landry. She would eventually find out the truth and I didn’t want her to find out from anyone besides me.
“You are free to go whenever you are ready,” Eliza told me with a warm smile. “Taylor, will you take you to your new home.”
My new home.
That felt weird to think about. I nodded and glanced at Taylor.
“Your things have been brought there already, including the stuff you put in storage,” he explained.
I was surprised by this, and my face must have shown it because he let out a laugh.
“Alpha Gavin is thorough,” he explained. “Should we get going?”
“Okay,” I said.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...