Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 169
Chapter 0169
Judy’s POV
“You’re a miracle working,” Beta Taylor breathed. “There’s not even a scar left.”
“I can’t take all the credit,” a woman’s voice replied. er wolf is strong and was able to heal most of her already. 1 only applied some ointment to help with the external Injuries.”
“Alpha Gavin will be pleased when he sees her,” Taylor sald. “When do you think she’ll wake up?”
“She was overly exhausted and very dehydrated, not to mention a little malnourished from this week,‘ the woman said softly. “I can’t imagine what she went through this week. We should let her rest a little further.”
I groaned as my fingers twitched to life and both their voices faded away. I managed to open my eyes but closed them upon seeing the bright light of whatever room I was in. I could tell I was in bed, and I could hear the light beeping of the heart monitor near the bed.
I must have been in the hospital. I remembered Beta Taylor carrying me out of the Cash family manor, and then everything went black as I passed out. He must have brought me to the Silver Crescent Hospital, which was known to have the best doctors in the world.
“It seems she’s waking up now,” the woman said, sounding pleased.
“Once again, you’re a miracle worker,” Taylor said, sounding far too proud of this woman.
She chuckled and for the first time, it sounded almost intimate. My brows furrowed together as I moved my head, trying to get a feel for my body. Thankfully, I wasn’t feeling any pain, and I was even able to move my hand, which meant it was no longer sprained.
“Behave yourself, Taylor,” the woman said.
I heard him kissing her and her breathy chuckles. When I opened my eyes for the second time, it was a bit easier this time. I looked over to see Taylor kissing the side of her face and she playfully shoved him away.
“Not while I’m working,” she murmured against him
“But I’ve missed you,” he replied. “You’ve been gone too long.”
“It’s my job. You know there was an emergency in a different faraway pack that I had to attend to. But I’m here now and I’m not going anywhere for a while. We have time to catch up,” she assured him.
He pouted and wrapped his arms around her.
“I know,” he sighed. “It’s not fair. No one else is separated from their mate for this long.”
Mate?!
This woman was Beta Taylor’s mate?? I knew that Taylor was mated, but I honestly didn’t think much about it. I had no idea that his mate was a doctor in the Silver Crescent hospital, let alone a traveling doctor.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...