Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 168
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She let out a loud laugh, cutting off my words.
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“Oh, you mean the mother who just signed a contract to be our live in maid for the next unforeseen future?” She asked, folding her arms across her chest Now, you’re a maid’s daughter, which is even worse than what you currently are. It won’t be long before you’re sharing a room with your precious mother. My mom never lets maids live in her pristine guest rooms. She’s going to be moving here by tomorrow morning at the latest.”
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I pressed my lips in a thin line; they promised her that she would be able to live in the guest room and still be a part of the family while she did some household chores. Had they lied to her? Did she even read the contract before signing it? My stomach twisted in a tight knot and my hands trembled at my sides. I couldn’t let that happen to my mother; Something had to be done about this. They were terrible people, and they were feeding off our misfortune.
“I will kill you if you do anything to hurt my mother!
growled, my eyes growing red with fury.
Her hand moved so fast that I barely saw it, but I felt the sting in my cheek and the loud slapping sound. Before I could react, she grabbed my hair and yanked me to the ground as her foot came down and stomped on my injured hand. I screamed in pain as I grabbed her ankle and pulled her to the ground. I focused my attention on all my training even though I was pretty sure my hand was fractured or at least sprained. However, I managed to the best of her and pinned her to the ground.
She screamed and clawed at me, bringing forth the claws of her wolf, and scratched at my flesh until the scent of my blood filled the room. I hissed out in pain, trying to get her to unlatch from me.
Before I could retaliate, the door swung open, and I heard a loud gasp.
“Kelsey!” Meredith cried as Kelsey managed to shove me off her and swiped her claws across the flesh of my face, leaving her markings on my cheek. I cried out in pain as the sting took over my entire body and burned. Her nails had wolfbane nail polish on them, which was why it hurt so badly and made me coward away.
“What is the meaning of this??” I heard Beta Taylor growling as a couple of Silver Crescent guards grabbed Kelsey and pulled her away from me.
She attacked my daughter, obviously,” Meredith hissed as she went over to Kelsey. “She should be punished!”
My fingers trembled as I kept my injured face covered and my eyes averted away from them.
“Get Judy’s things,” Taylor ordered one of the guards who nodded and went to grab my suitcase which was thrown across the room. Taylor turned to Richard who stood at the doorway with his eyes wide as he looked between me and his daughter. “Is this how you raised your daughter? You should be ashamed of yourself. Alpha Gavin will hear about this.”
“P… please,” Richard stammered. “There’s been a misunderstanding…”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...