Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 163
Chapter 0163
Judy’s POV
My stomach was growling angrily. I hadn’t eaten much other than scraps in days. When Kelsey came to get me and told me to come to the dining hall, I thought I was going to finally get some decent food. But I was sorely disappointed when I saw that they had already eaten and left not even a single morsel.
All that was left were their dirty plates and empty wine glasses.
She gave the maids the night off and she expected me o clean the entire mess by myself, while she watched like some kind of creep.
She ridiculed me the entire time.
I grabbed a large tray and started to pile up some of the glasses and plates on the tray. Just as I walked past her and towards the kitchen, she stuck her foot out, making me fall to the ground and shatter most of the plates and glasses. One of the glass chunks sliced through my finger and I hissed in pain as I saw blood pooling in my palm..
“So, fucking clumsy!” Kelsey hissed. “Look what you did!”
“You were the one who tripped me,” I murmured as I cradled my injured hand. She swung her hand so fast; I didn’t even see it coming. But I felt the sting of the slap and I bit my lip from the force. I tasted blood in my mouth from splitting my lip open.
Why was this happening to me? What had I done to deserve this??
“Awe, are you going to cry now?” Kelsey asked, folding her arms across her chest. “Get over yourself. Nobody is coming to your rescue, especially not your weak ass mother.”
I lifted my gaze and stared at her through my tear–filled eyes.
“Don’t you dare speak about my mother like that,” I said, my tone coming out shaky. I knew if I truly wanted to, I could easily beat the crap out of Kelsey. But I couldn’t because of my mother… she would never forgive me if I ruined this for her.
I felt so helpless at this moment. The pain in my hand stung even worse as Kelsey laughed.
“You are nothing but a useless bitch! Only good for being a slave and cleaning up after my family’s meal. How does it feel to be a nobody?”
Just then, the door of the dining hall burst open, and Kelsey staggered back when she saw the intruder.
“What is the meaning of this?!” A familiar roar echoed through the room. My entire body stilled upon. haring his voice.
I lifted my gaze, and I was stunned to see Gavin standing before me. Anger was rolling off him in waves as he glared daggers at Kelsey. His Lycan aura shining brighter than his Alpha aura. He was pissed and he was about to make everyone in this house knows it.
“A… Alpha,” Kesley stammered, suddenly looking like a weak child. “I was just… I was…
“She’s hurt a
and you’re ridiculing her,” Gavin hissed; it wasn’t a question, just an observation. “Why is
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...