Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 162
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Raymond entered the room shortly after and whispered something to one of the maids. She nodded and went with a few others towards the kitchen.
“Sorry for the delay. She’s going to start bringing out our meal now,” Raymond said as he took his seat at the head of the table.
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“But not everyone is here yet,” I said, glancing around the table and wasn’t an empty chair left..
“Oh, were you expecting someone else, Alpha?” Raymond asked with a frown. “I wasn’t aware. Your Beta didn’t inform me…”
I glanced at Michele Montague who looked a bit sheepish. I got the feeling that she knew who I was talking about. She bit her bottom lip and stared down at her plate, refusing to meet my eyes.
“I guess not,” I murmured, still confused, keeping it quiet for right now.
Soon, the maids were returning with our food, and they served us both the meal and wine.
‘Daddy, the maids have been working so hard. I think we should give them the rest of the evening off,” Kelsey said as she nibbled on her steak
“And who will clean up after dinner?” Raymond asked raising his brows.
“I’ll take care of it,” she said, shrugging. “It’s honestly no problem. It’s the least I can do.”
Raymond thought it over carefully before relenting and nodding.
“Okay,” he said, taking a big bite of his food. “If you don’t mind.”
She grinned as she continued to eat her food.
We spoke casually for most of the meal; I couldn’t help but worry about Judy though. She was somewhere in this manor… I could smell her as if she was right next to me. Her mother kept avoiding my gaze and continued to eat without contributing to the conversation. Kelsey continued to brush against me and a few times, I felt her foot on my leg. I had to keep shoving it off and positioning myself away from her.
Raymond spoke mostly about the advantages of his pack and how excited he was that his son was going to be the Alpha. It was a long time coming and nobody deserved it more than Ethan. He expressed how Irene fit right into the family. Meredith chimed in at that point and said something about Irene, inviting them to the country club for brunch at some point next week.
After the meal concluded, Raymond stood to his feet.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...