Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 164
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She was trembling and keeping her eyes on her open wound. I wrapped my arms around her, hating how tense she was from my touch. I pulled her into me and lifted her into my arms. She sucked in a sharp breath as she held onto me with her good hand and carefully positioned her injured hand away so she wouldn’t get any blood on me.
“Take me to your bathroom,” I ordered Raymond.
“Yes, Alpha,” he said quickly as he rushed out of the dining hall. I followed after him, not bothering to spare the mother and daughter duo another look. As we walked down the hallway, I heard a loud gasp from nearby.
“Judy??” Michele exclaimed. “What happened? Are you okay?”
“I’m okay, Mom,” she said weakly. “Just a little cut.”
“She’s losing a lot of blood. I need to patch it before she loses anymore,” I said as I continued to follow Raymond down the hall.
We entered the bathroom and just as Raymond was about to say something more, I slammed the door in
his face.
I let out a breath of air. Judy was still tense, and her eyes were fixed on her wound. I set her down on the counter as I searched the bathroom for a first aid kit. It didn’t take long to find one under the sink
“You don’t have to do this,” Judy said, breaking the silence.
I glanced up at her briefly before I rummaged through the first aid kit, uncovering bandages and ointment.
“Do you expect me to let you bleed out?” I asked her in return.
She shrugged her shoulder, but she said nothing. I grabbed her hand and turned on the water to the sink.
The moment my hand wrapped around her wrist, she tensed and made it impossible for me to move her.
I frowned at her.
“Just let me take care of you,” I breathed, my body becoming so aware of hers that I was practically on fire. She stared into my eyes for a moment longer before relaxing herself. I brought her hand to the warm water and started to rinse out her wound. She winced from the sting and her body tensed once again, but it only lasted a moment. Soon, she was relaxing again, and she was releasing a breath of relief.
I ran circles with my thumb around her wrist, soothing her, as I cleaned her wound. With each stroke of my thumb, she relaxed even more and I notice she was now looking at me periodically. I tried to pretend I didn’t notice, but I could feel the heat of her stare on the side of my face, and I had to fight the smile tugging at the corner of my lips.
“Why are you here?” She asked, breaking the thick silence that started to consume us.
I grabbed the bandages, along with some ointment that will keep her wound from getting infected.
“I came here for you.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...