Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 161
Chapter 161
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A knot formed in the pit of my stomach as I stared at my Beta. “Then, where is she??”
“She moved into the Cash family manor,” Taylor blurted.
Fury boiled through me; over my dead body will I allow Judy to continue living in that mansion. Not after the way they treated her the last time we were there.
“Get Raymond Cash on the phone; I’m inviting myself over for dinner,” I said through my teeth.
“Yes, Alpha,” Taylor said with a smirk. “Is there a specific reason you want me to give him?”
I narrowed my eyes at him.
“I’m a Lycan Chairmen, I don’t need a reason,” I all but barked.
Taylor nodded and went off to do what I asked. An hour later, I was receiving an email inviting me to the Cash manor for dinner with Raymond Cash and his family.
‘Are you sure you don’t want me to go in with you?” Taylor asked as he pulled up the front doors of the Cash family manor. “If you lose your temper, it could start some issues.”
“I can handle myself,” I muttered. “But stay here, just in case.”
“Will do,” Taylor said as he watched me get out of the car and walk towards the front doors. The butler opened the door before I reached the top step of the porch.
“Alpha Gavin Landry, it’s an honor to have you in my home and having dinner with my family and 1,1 Raymond said with a broad smile. “I have to admit though, I was quite curious about the reason behind this meeting.”
“There’s no reason, Raymond. I figured if my daughter is going to marry into this family, I need to get to know you a little better. After all, we are all family now, aren’t we?” I said, raising my brows at him.
He looked nervous and had a small trail of sweat on his forehead.
“Yes, of course,” he said, nodding his head. “I apologize. I’m glad to have you here.”
“Well, hello there, Alpha,” Kelsey, the 18–year–old Cash daughter said as she made her way down the stairs. “When I heard you were joining us for dinner, I had to get the perfect dress for the occasion. Do you like it?”
It was a shimmering gold dress that sparkled under the crystal chandelier.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...