Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 135
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Meredith and Kelsey chuckled and continued their banter.
It was as if they had forgotten I was there.
“What is that foul smell,” another voice said from nearby. I froze at the sound of that voice. “Oh… it’s you.”
I turned to see Sophia, Ethan’s grandmother, approaching us.
“Why are you here? Shouldn’t you be licking your wounds or something? My grandson left you for someone much better. Don’t tell me you’re here to get him back?”
“I’m not here for that, Grandma,” I told her, trying to sound as polite as I could. Regardless of how cruel Grandma Sophia was, I was always taught to treat my elderly with respect, and I wouldn’t treat her less.
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“Don’t call me that,” she hissed. “I’m not your grandmother. I never would be. Even if my grandson chose to marry you. I’m glad he came to his senses. You were never good enough for him. I knew your family was bad news the second I met you. Η
I frowned at her words. She always had a good relationship with my mother and father, so I wasn’t sure why she was saying such cruel words about them now,
“It’s only right that your father landed himself in prison,” Meredith said, folding her arms across her chest. “He was a slimeball from the beginning. I always wondered how he got to the top and now I know … he didn’t deserve any of it.”
My cheeks flared as anger rose inside of me; they could say what they wanted about me… but when it came to my family, they had crossed the line.
“He’s barely her father,” Kelsey chuckled. “Remember, she’s an adopted orphan because her birth parents didn’t want her. She’s a nobody… a loser… she will always be abandoned by those around her.”
They all chuckled at Kelsey’s words as I felt my heart breaking into pieces. I shouldn’t let their words affect me like this. I was training to be a gamma warrior for crying out loud. But I couldn’t help but feel some pieces of truth in them. I was abandoned… I was abandoned by almost everyone in my life except for my mother. She had always been my rock, and I worried since my father had gone to prison and my mother fell into that deep depression that I was going to lose her too. But thankfully she seemed to be snapping out of her depressive state, and I had her back. Now I just needed to get my father back. It’s not like he meant to abandon me… he was in prison against his will. But I still felt as if he had left our family, leaving me to pick up the broken pieces.
I glanced over to see my mother speaking with a couple of packmates; they were chuckling at whatever they were saying. Then, my eyes wandered over to Irene and Ethan. He was introducing her to a few of his friends; the same friends who had once welcomed me into their circle and treated me kindly. Now they had given me the cold shoulder and those who I thought were my actual friends stopped taking my phone calls. The only one who stuck by side through this entire thing was Nan and she never liked Ethan to begin with.
I should have just listened to her when she told me that Ethan was no good and that I deserved better.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...