Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 136
Chapter 0136
Judy’s POV
“And who do you think you are?” Meredith asked, raising her brows at the man standing behind me.
“This is a private party,” Sophia chimed in. “You weren’t invited.”
“This is a pack party and you are not pack,” Meredith added, rolling her eyes.
“He’s handsome though. Maybe he should stay,” Kelsey purred, batting her lashes. My stomach twisted and I fought the urge to growl at her.
I felt a warm hand on my shoulder, and my entire body seemed to immediately respond to the touch. I felt myself relaxing and releasing a breath I hadn’t known I’was holding.
“Are you okay?” Gavin asked me. I glanced up at him and I could see the concern in his eyes.
I nodded at him, despite my heart feeling heavy in my chest.
“Oh, please,” Kelsey laughed. “Don’t tell me you brought a callboy to the pack barbeque. That’s a new low even for you.”
“You seriously had to hire someone to be your date this evening?” Meredith asked, shaking her head at me. “That’s truly disgusting.”
“Pardon?” Gavin asked, raising his brows.
Gavin was dressed casually, and it made my heart flutter. He was barely recognizable without his suit, but he was still so handsome. He also hadn’t really been in the media as of late, so it didn’t surprise me that he wasn’t recognized at first. I stayed silent, not sure what to say, watching as Ethan’s family made a fool out of themselves.
Gavin had a deep frown on his lips as he observed the cash family and their treatment of me.
“I can’t believe she even bothered to show up at all… but with a male prostitute?” Sophia asked, her lip curled in disgust. “You are a shameless woman!”
“Is this how you treat your guests?” Gavin asked, his brow raised to his hairline. “With this much disrespect. Who’s responsible for the wine on her clothes?”
“It’s honestly fine,” I said, grabbing onto his arm. “I think it was a mistake to come here. I would like to leave now.”
“Not until I find out who’s responsible for this,” he said, his voice low and sending warmth to form on my cheeks
“She deserved it after what she said to me,” Kelsey said, folding her arms across her chest. “I bet you didn’t know that she was engaged to marry my brother. He didn’t want her, just like her birth parents didn’t want her. You are wasting your time with this one, sir. She’s an abandoned orphan and nobody in their right mind would ever want her. I’m glad my brother came to his senses. You should come to yours
soon too.”
“Is that right?” He asked, his voice having a rather dangerous edge to it and I felt the chill run up my
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...