Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 134
Chapter 0134
Judy’s POV
“You are such trash, Judy Montague. Why the hell are you at my family’s barbeque?” Kelsey asked, folding her arms across her busty chest, her pink lips gressed into a thin line as she glared at me.
“If I remember correctly, the entire pack is invited, Kelsey. So, what’s the problem?” I asked her, narrowing my eyes. I wasn’t going to let her bully me, especially because I was only there as a favor to Irene. I didn’t need to deal with Kelsey right now,
“That doesn’t include you, Slut,” she barked.
Was she seriously calling me the slut when Ethan was the one who left me for someone else? It wasn’t the other way around so I’m not sure what she’s insinuating
“It’s pathetic that you just let
showed your face here. Trying to beg Ethan to return to you? Can’t you him go and let him be happy? He found someone worthy of his time and love. Irene fits in perfectly with our family. We’ve only known her for a little bit, but she’s already the perfect sister–in–law.”
“I’m not here to beg for Ethan,” I murmured. “I’m only here to support my friend.”
“Yeah right,” Kelsey said mockingly. “I highly doubt you are here to support anyone but yourself. You are pathetic, Judy.”
“What’s going on?” Ethan asked as he stepped beside his sister. “You aren’t making trouble again, are you Kels?” He asked her.
She frowned up at him and narrowed her icy blue eyes.
“Of course not, Ethan. I’m only looking out for you. I’m not letting this bitch weasel her way back into your life when you have fully moved on from her,” she said sourly.
Ethan sighed and ran his fingers through his hair.
“I don’t need you to look out for me. I’m more than capable of doing so myself,” he assured her.
She rolled her eyes.
“I’m your sister; it’s my job to protect you,” she complained.
“You are my little sister,” he reminded her. “Please, don’t make any more trouble for yourself or for me.”
She scowled at him but before she could say anything, Irene intervened.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...