Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 133
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“I don’t trust them, Mom,” I told her. “They aren’t good people…”
“Well, I just don’t believe that,” she said, shaking her head.
I sighed; there was no point in arguing with her. I knew I wouldn’t be able to change her mind. After a while, I gave up on the conversation and made my mother and me some lunch before we got dressed for the barbeque. I settled on a skirt and a blouse. It was a designer skirt, so hopefully they won’t comment on my clothes.
I braided my hair and applied some makeup to make my features pop. By the time I was finished dressing for the event, it was time to leave. My mother drove us in her car, and it didn’t take long to get to the Cash family manor. It was huge and there were a couple of guest houses off to the side.
If they truly wanted to, they could easily pay off my father’s debt and make things okay again for my family. But they were greedy and would never help us without there being a secret motive behind it. I just hoped my mother was careful with whatever she agreed to.
My mother walked through the manor as if she owned the place; she had her head held high and I admired that. She didn’t look as if she spent a month in bed; she looked as if nothing was wrong. She wore one of her designer dresses and her hair was tied in a neat pony, flowing evenly down her back.
She wore heels that made her legs look great and makeup that made her look professional and dashing. We reached the back patio where the barbeque was happening; the Cash family had a huge yard with an attached garden which I knew Ethan’s mother loved, and a pool yard, where his sister, Kelsey, usually hung out.
They usually invite most of the pack to their annual barbeque so they can see how well off they live. They also invite the riches from other packs as well, including Gavin apparently. Part of me hoped that he’d show up… but another part hoped that he didn’t. It would be weird for him to suddenly make an appearance, especially now that his daughter is marrying into the family. Irene would have felt as if he was following her or watching her. This was her first time meeting Ethan’s family and truthfully, I wanted it to go well for her. I didn’t want them to treat her like they treated me.
“Judy! You made it!” I heard the familiar voice of Irene as she rushed over to me. I saw the large smile spread across her face, and she quickly wrapped her arms around me to hug me before stepping back. ” You look lovely.”
“You look great too,” I told her, hating how true that was. Irene did look stunning in her black backless dress that showed off her cleavage perfectly and her long flowing blond hair cascading around her shoulders and down her back. She didn’t need to wear a lot of makeup to make her features pop, and her smile was brighter than the sun.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...