Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 124
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But the second I saw her swollen cheek and the cut on her lip, I was seeing fucking red. Family or not, my nephew was going to die for what he did to her.
Kissing her wasn’t part of the plan, but it certainly calmed both me and my wolf down. The moment I kissed her, I knew stopping was going to be almost impossible. At first, I tasted the blood on her lip, but then her wound started to close, and I wondered if it was her wolf that was healing her, or me…
I pulled her into me even closer, feeling every curve of her body pressed against mine. I pulled her towards the car, not letting my lips wander from hers until we reached the front door of the car, and I knocked on it, forcing Taylor to roll down his window,
I reluctantly broke the kiss to look at Taylor’s smug face. Judy was breathless and her lips were no longer swollen from the wound but swollen from my kiss.
“Get
out,” I told him. “Wait out here.”
“Yes, sir,” Taylor said with a sparkle of humor in his eyes as he rolled up the window and then stepped out of the car. The second he was out of the car and the door was shut, I opened the back door and gently helped Judy into the backseat.
and
She lay on her back, waiting for me to join her. I slowly crawled across her body, shutting the door behind me. She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen; her dress hugged her figure perfectly
my wolf was practically feral, wanting her out of that dress and naked in my arms. I kissed along the nape of her neck, and she gasped at the sensation, I sucked on the soft spot where her neck met her shoulder, and a soft moan escaped her lips as she ran her fingers through my hair. Her fingertips felt good brushing across my scalp, and I felt a shiver running across my spine.
I slowly pulled down the straps of her dress, pulling until her incredible breasts were on display. Her nipples were hard and begging for me to touch them. She let out a breathy gasp as my tongue twirled around one of her nipples, sucking it into my mouth and teasing her until she was panting with need.
“Gavin…” she gasped.
Warmth spread across her body, practically radiating off her and warming me in return. A smile crept along my lips; I loved the effect I had on her and I wondered what else I could do to make her react in this way. I tugged her nipple with my teeth, making her whimper and arch her back. I could smell her desires pooling between her legs and it caused my wolf to growl hungrily.
I trailed my lips down her body, kissing her above her dress until I reached the bottom layer of her dress.
I used my hands to gently push her dress up and my eyes darkened when I saw the black silk panties she was wearing.
Was she wearing these for Walter?
The thought pissed me off and I had to bite back a growl.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...