Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 125
Chapter 0125
Judy’s POV
The words were out of my mouth before I could truly think about what they meant. They seemed to be his unraveling though because in the next second, he was buried deep inside of me and I was screaming out his name, all thoughts of anything leaving my mind in an instant. As he thrust himself inside of me, he kept hitting that perfect spot that made my legs tingle and my body hum with excitement, even my wolf was in complete bliss, completely forgetting about the heartbreak from our falled mating.
Gavin’s lips found mine again and he sucked my bottom lip into his mouth. I smiled into the kiss, wanting so much more of him. I wanted to be even closer if that was possible. I ran my fingers through his soft locks of hair, holding his head so I could kiss him until my heart was content. He didn’t fight me on it; he let me explore him and take what I needed.
“Judy…” he moaned against me. I loved the way my name sounded on his lips, and I wanted to hear it again and again.
I could feel him swelling and twitching inside of me, but he was holding himself back. He reached between us and started to rub my core with his thumb, teasing and tugging my clit until I could no longer hold it in anymore. With a final yell of his name, I was coming undone and he was following me over the edge. I felt him release his seed inside of me and we were soon both a sweating and panting mess of entanglement.
We remained like that for a short while, attempting to catch our breath before he got off me and pulled me to a sitting position. I ran my fingers through my disheveled hair, feeling my cheeks flush with embarrassment. I’m not sure what came over me, but this was not how I thought my night would be ending.
Gavin was quick to adjust himself and make himself decent again as if nothing had happened. I stared at him wide–eyed, not believing that he was able to recover himself so quickly. A smirk played on his lips as he swiped his thumb across my bottom lip and then tucked a fallen strand of hair behind my ear. He kissed my forehead affectionately, making my heart skip a beat.
He gave me a second to adjust my dress before he rolled down the window. Taylor was standing outside the car and his cheeks were red. There was no doubt in my mind that he heard the entire thing, I wanted to die from embarrassment, but Gavin didn’t seem bothered.
“Take us back to my Villa,” he ordered.
Taylor nodded and hurried into the driver’s seat. He was quick to close the little window separating the front seat from the backseat, giving Gavn and me some more privacy.
I looked up at Gavin, surprised.
“You aren’t taking me home?” I asked him.
He raised a brow at me.
“Do you want to return home?”
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...