Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 123
Chapter 0123
Judy’s POV
I could feel my cheek swelling from the force and the cat in my lip dripping with blood. The moment he saw the blood on my face, I could see the horror in his eyes. He released me quickly and stepped back, holding up his hands.
The motion of him holding up his hands though caused me to flinch, which caused hurt to flash in his
eyes.
“Judy… I’m-”
“Don’t touch me,”
“I said through my teeth, my voice coming out unfamiliar.
“I’m… I’m so sorry…” he said, covering his face with his hands. “I didn’t mean to hurt you….”
“Just leave…” I said, desperate to hold back these tears until he was gone.
He didn’t keep me waiting long, he said nothing more as he turned and ran from me. The moment he was out of sight, I let myself crumble. Tears flowed down my cheeks, stinging the wound on my lip. I touched my swollen cheek with my fingertips and winced. Thankfully, there were no witnesses, but I wasn’t going to stick around long enough for anyone to come outside and see my situati
I quickly hurried from the back patio. I didn’t bother going back inside; I thought about saying goodbye to Irene, but the moment she saw my face, she would be questioning me, and I couldn’t answer those questions right now. My entire body was trembling as I made my way around the front of the building.
Walter was my ride and there was no way in hell I was going to find him and have him bring me home. I reached into my purse and grabbed my phone. I was about to call for an Uber but then I heard my name and my entire body froze.
“Judy?”
I knew that voice as if it were my own and I was dreading facing him right now. I couldn’t seem to keep the tears from flowing down my cheeks. I kept my back towards him, not wanting him to see me weak like this. I heard the car door opening and then shutting, soon, I was engulfed in the familiar scent as I felt his hands on my shoulders,
Electricity pulsated through my flesh from his touch, and I hated that I was drawn to him like this.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...