Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 122
Chapter 0122
“Walter?” I asked after a long pause.
He blinked a few times and cleared his throat, meeting my eyes, he gave me a boyish smile.
“I like you, Judy,” he blurted out, making me raise my brows. “I really like you. I think I could potentially fall in love with you.”
My heart sank in my chest; any woman would love to hear those words, especially from Walter Landry. He was every woman’s eye candy, and I was so lucky to be in this position with him… but I didn’t feel the same way about him. I thought of him more like a friend than anything. But I truly did not want to hurt
him.
“So, I wanted to ask you… if… you’d be my girlfriend,” he concluded, his eyes shining with hope and love. It made my stomach twist guiltily.
I twiddled with my fingers thinking about that kiss on the dance floor and the fact that I had sex with his uncle the other day. My cheeks flushed at the memory, and I bit my lower lip.
“Walter…” I said slowly, a sigh leaving my lips.
It was enough for him to know that this wasn’t going to be a good conversation and that I wasn’t giving him the answer he wanted. I watched as his face fell a little, but he remained silent so that I could
continue.
“I think you’re a really great guy,” I told him, looking up to meet his eyes. “And any woman would be so lucky to have you. But I’m not really in a place to be seriously involved with anyone. As you already
know, my
fated mate is marrying another woman, and my wolf is messed up over it…”
“I’m not like him though,” Walter said, grabbing a hold of my arm, startling me. “I’m different than him. I would never hurt you. Just give it some time and you can grow to love me as can your wolf.” I shook my head and tried to pull my hand away from him.
“Walter, you’re amazing and I’m so sorry. I don’t want to hurt you, t about you as you do for me. I tried… I truly did but-”
I just don’t feel the same way
“Then try harder!” He exclaimed, his grip tightening We have fun together and we have amazing chemistry, Judy.”
“As friends,” I told him, trying to keep my tone under control so we wouldn’t draw any unwanted attention.
“That’s a lie and you know it!” He scolded me. “We fucking kissed!!”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...