Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 117
Chapter 0117
Judy’s POV
“You know your father and I have a long history,” Dalsy sald, giving an awkward chuckle.
Irene nodded thoughtfully.
“Yes, his fated mate, my mother, was your sister,” Irene replied. “Unfortunately, my father isn’t on the market for dating at the moment.
Daisy pressed her red lips in a thin line as she narrowed her eyes at Irene. Even she knew she had to be careful about what she said in the presence of Gavin’s daughter.
“We are only friends, of course,” Daisy said through her tight–lipped smile. “Don’t overthink things.” She glanced in my direction and sized me up for a moment and then she curled her lip in disgust again. “That dress is too tacky for me. I’ll find something else,” she muttered. She spun on her heel and walked away.
I let out a breath I hadn’t known I was holding. The fake smile Irene was sporting dropped immediately and then she turned to me.
“I hate that bitch,” she muttered. I was surprised by this, but I relaxed immediately after hearing Irene’s words and then I let out a soft chuckle. Irene gave me a gentle smile and nudged me towards the changing room. “Get changed and we can grab some lunch before we head back. I know you have tutoring this evening
“Sounds good,” I told her.
As much as I loved the dress, it was nice wearing my normal clothes again. Stacy was quick to take the dress and package it for me. Irene found a gorgeous dress for herself as well and Irene packaged that for her. We reached the counter, and Stacy rang up the dresses.
“For Judy, the dress is 3 million dollars and for Irene, the dress is 1 million,” Stacy said, lifting her gaze.
My mouth dropped open. That was so much money. I wasn’t expecting a simple dress to cost that much. Without even blinking, Irene grabbed a black card and handed it to Stacy.
You can charge t
dresses to this card,” Irene said as she pulled out her phone to check her messages.
I stared at her dumbfounded at how casual she was to be spending that much money. Stacy looked delighted as she charged the card. Once it went through, she printed the receipt and handed the receipt and card to Irene. She carefully handed us each a box which Taylor and Gamma Derek took from us to help out. They were so well hidden in the shadows and kept to themselves that I completely forgot that they were even there.
I smiled my thanks to Taylor as he took my box, and he nodded in acknowledgment. We left the store, thankfully without any more run–ins with Daisy, and we grabbed lunch. This time, we invited the Gammas and Beta Taylor to join us, not wanting to be alone even for a second. Once we finished with lunch, we went to the Villa so I could tutor Matt.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...