Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 116
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Chapter 0116
“It’s beautiful,” she breathed, her eyes shining as she took me in.
I glanced down at the dress shyly.
“You don’t think it’s too much?” I asked her.
“Oh, goddess no!” she said, waving off my concern. “Not for the Gala. Come on, you must show Irene.”
She opened the dressing room door, and I stepped out into the light. Irene stood by a rack of new dresses but when she heard me step out of the changing room she turned to look at me. Her eyes grew large, and her mouth fell open at the sight of me.
“Wow!” She breathed. “You look amazing.”
There was a flash of something in her eyes that I couldn’t quite understand but it was gone in a heartbeat. It almost looked like jealousy, I quickly brushed that thought out of my head; Irene was drop- dead gorgeous; there was no way she was jealous of me.
“We definitely have to get you that dress. Walter is going to lose his mind,” Irene breathed. “Now, I’m going to find my own dress. I’ll come find you when I’m done.”
She took off a moment later. I turned to the standing mirror beside me, and I was taken aback by how beautiful the dress looked on me. I was honestly stunning, which was something I never thought I would say about myself.
Nan would completely lose her mind if she saw me.
I turned away and started to walk towards the dressing room when I walked straight into somebody.
“Ew, watch where you are going,” I heard a familiar voice saying in a scowl.
I looked up only to see Daisy glaring down at me with her arms folded across her chest. She lip curled in disgust as she took me in and her eyes narrowed. I’ve only encountered Daisy once and it wasn’t pleasant. It was when I went to dinner with Gavin to discuss my contract while working for him.
Her gaze shifted to the dress I was wearing, and she took a step back to examine it, and then a smile spread across her lips.
“That dress is perfect. I’ll take it,” she said, motioning for Stacy.
Stacy raised her brows and then looked at me before looking back at her.
“Sorry Miss Baldwin, but I’m afraid this dress has already been taken,” Stacy said, a bit awkwardly.
Daisy lifted her lip up into a curl as she glared at Stacy.
“I’m Daisy Baldin, the heiress of the Baldwin Estate. I get everything that I want and what I want is that dress,” she snarled. “I could literally ruin you.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...