Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 118
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She knew her father was smart enough to see through Daisy though, so she tried not to stress too hard. “How do I look?” Walter asked as he leaned against the doorframe of Irene’s bedroom. She turned to look at him and her face lit up. He was so handsome in his suit and the silver mask with features that complimented his attire made her grin even wider.
“Like my father,” she admitted. “Did you cut your hair?”
He nodded and ran his fingers through his hair.
ld be nice.”
“Yes,” he answered out loud. “I wanted to be cleaned up for tonight so I figured a haircut would
“Well, you look very handsome, Walter. Judy is a lucky woman,” Irene told him thoughtfully. He shrugged and glanced at the ground.
“I’m the lucky one,” he murmured. “I really like her. Ithink I’m going to ask her tonight to be my girlfriend.”
Irene frowned and thought about it for a moment.
“You don’t think it’s too soon?” she asked.
He frowned.
“I know it might seem like it’s too soon, but I truly feel as if she’s the right one for me,” he breathed.
“But she’s not your fated mate.”
He raised his brows.
“And Ethan isn’t yours. But you’re still marrying him. You know he’s the right one for you,” he reminded her.
She blushed at the reminder and then bit her lower lip
“You’re right,” she admitted. “I just don’t want to see anyone get hurt.”
“I would never hurt her,” he told her. “If she doesn’t want to move to France with me, then I’ll see about moving here permanently. I can open my own business here and start new roots.”
Irene raised her brows.
“You’d do that for her?” She asked. “Even after a couple of dates?”
He blushed.
“I think I might be falling in love with her,” he admitted. “Those couple of dates were all I needed to know for sure. I guess tonight I’ll find out if the feeling is mutual and then we will go from there.”
Irene smiled thoughtfully at her cousin and then stepped closer to him to hug him.
“I’m so happy for you, Walter,” she breathed.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...