Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 106
Chapter 0106
Gavin’s POV
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My body worked faster than my mind; it was as if it knew exactly where Judy was. I burst through the house and ran as fast as I could into the basement, following her scent. It was potent and when I reached the bottom of the basement, it was clear why it was so strong and why my wolf was going wild for her.
It was because of her scent.
She was in heat.
She was lying on the ground in the cage, whimpering and rolling around in pain. Her clothes were torn, but she was still relatively covered so I knew they hadn’t done anything to her yet. Her cheeks were flushed, and her eyes were closed. She was rubbing he legs together, panting, and biting her bottom lip. Her lips were swollen and pink and the sounds of her breathy moans went straight to my cock. My wolf was itching to have a taste of her, and it took everything I had to hold him back. 1
If other unmated males were to get a whiff of her, I don’t think they’d be as strong.
I walked into the cage and when her eyes fluttered open, I saw the lust and desires in them. Her cheeks lit up pink as she stared at me; I wasn’t sure if she knew who was standing before her. All she knew was was a male and I could satisfy her. Those who have aphrodisiacs in their system don’t care where they get their relief.
“Please…” she whispered hoarsely, trying to reach out for me. “I need you…”
She was still rubbing her legs together and I caught sight of the moisture between her inner thighs, making my wolf howl in my head. Her desires were pooling between her legs, and she reached up to her shirt, ripping it even more than it was already ripped, exposing her erect and pink nipples.
A low growl emerged from my
throat.
“It’s so hot…” she whispered. “Please…”
I took a steady deep breath and sent a mindlink to Taylor.
“I need you to get the car ready and send all unmated Gammas away this instant,” I ordered.
“What’s going on?” Taylor asked.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...