Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 107
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Chapter 0107
I couldn’t help but inhale hers as well; she smelled so sweet like vanilla and lavender and the lust that consumed her made it even stronger, giving it an even spleier aroma,
I brought her up the stairs, glad to see that the rogues hadn’t returned. I walked outside to find a car waiting out front with Beta Taylor leaning against the side of it. He straightened his posture when he saw me walk outside and when his eyes narrowed at July and he took in his scent, his face paled.
“Damn, you weren’t joking,” he murmured.
“Just open the back door,” I muttered as I walked toward the car. Taylor opened the back door for us to get in. I first positioned Judy in the seat and then got in beside her, tucking her into my side. She wrapped her arms around my form and puzzled her face against the side of my body, heat still pouring
off her in waves.
“Should we go to the hospital?” Taylor asked as he started the car and drove away from the rogue hideout.
“No, take me to my Villa,” I answered.
Taylor glanced at me through the rearview mirror, a question on his lips.
“Are you sure about that?” He asked.
I let out a low and threatening growl and he nodded, not saying anything more. It took a long while, but we eventually made it back to my villa. Judy had fallen asleep in my arms, and I refused to let her go. I thanked Taylor before scooping Judy into my arms and bringing her inside the villa.
I said nothing to any of the maids, or Adam who was staring after us with a dumbfounded expression. I could see his eyes glowing as his wolf caught the wind of the unmated, she–wolf in heat and I gave him a warning growl as I walked by.
He submitted immediately; not even a mating male in the presence of an unmated she–wolf in heat could withstand the force of a Lycan wolf.
I brought Judy upstairs and into my suite; she had woken up since we arrived home, and she was back to whimpering and rubbing herself against my body.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...