Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 105
Chapter 0105
Just as I broke through the clearing and joined my Gamas and Beta, I froze entirely when I saw Ethan, naked as the day he was born, running out of the house with an unconscious Irene in his arms.
He froze when he saw us standing outside, glaring at him. I’m not sure what the hell was going on, but my wolf didn’t like the scene in front of us and he let out a ferocious growl.
“L… I found her,” Ethan said, panting as he held up Irene. “She was drugged and needs medical attention. I think she was beaten a little.”
My eyes zeroed in on my daughter and saw bruises along her cheeks. Through my powerful Lycan hearing, I could hear that she had a heartbeat, so she was alive thankfully. But how the hell did Ethan manage to get here before the rest of us? Did he already know she was here?
Was he behind this??
I wouldn’t let him pass; my wolf was furious and kept growling at him. I’m sure my eyes alone left him feeling paralyzed.
“Rogues are coming, Alpha,” Beta Taylor said through a mindlink.
Sure enough, there were several rogues that broke through the clearing, and they all looked ready for a fight. They were growling and snapping their canines but once they saw me, their confidence faded immediately, and they halted in their steps. Not even a rogue would be stupid enough to go against a Lycan; especially not a Lycan Chairmen.
Everybody knew who I was and if they dared challenge me, it would cost them their lives in an instant. I let out a ferocious growl in m their direction, making them shiver in fear. Without any attempt to fight, they all turned and ran as fast as they could away from us.
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I nodded at my men to go after them if they could. Most of them dispersed and went after the rogues, remained with Beta Taylor and a couple of other Gammas, each of us glaring at Ethan, waiting for him to explain before I ripped his throat out.
It was Beta Taylor that shifted first.
“How did you get here, Ethan?” Taylor asked, his eyes narrowed.
“I was worried when she didn’t answer my calls. I overheard you saying where she was and I went after her,” Ethan explained. “I only got here a few minutes ago and she was being attacked by rogues. She was drugged with wolfbane.”
“Where are the rogues that attacked her?” Taylor asked.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...