Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 104
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Fuck!
They were coming and he wasn’t sure how many of them there would be. He needed to get Judy out of here fast! He turned his direction back down the basement and quickly made his way to the cage where Judy wiggled on the ground; her body flushed from her heat and her scent singing to Ethan’s wolf.
He shifted back into his human form before his wolf could do anything stupid. He was completely naked, but nudity wasn’t a big deal amongst shifters. Just as he was about to pick Judy up, he heard someone moaning in pain.
His eyes lifted and to his surprise and horror, he saw Irene lying in the cage as well. His arms fell and his heart dropped.
“Irene?” He asked as he approached her.
He bent down to her and touched the side of her neck to find a pulse; it was beating quickly and from the tell of her unconscious state, she was drugged with wolfsbane.
“Shit shit shit!” He cursed as he looked between Irene and Judy.
He could only take one of them out of here for right now before those rogues get there. He couldn’t save them both despite the fact that he wanted to. Irene was the one person he needed for his future and Judy was the one person he wanted in his bed. After quick consideration, he made up his mind and he lifted Irene off the ground, cradling her against his chest as he quickly rushed out of the cage.
“Ethan….” He heard Judy’s breathy whisper from behind him. He paused for a moment and turned to look at her.
Her eyes were half open and she was staring at him, breathing through her parted lips. He wanted to kiss those lips and claim her as his all over again, but he had to get Irene out of there. If he saved Irene’s life, then Gavin would surely be grateful and make him the Alpha for sure.
“I’ll come back for you,” he told Judy.
He turned and quickly rushed up the stairs. He just needed to get Irene far from here and then he would come back for Judy. Hopefully, by then, it won’t be too late. But he wouldn’t be able to carry them both. out of here and get them to safety without the rogues coming after them. Especially when Judy was in heat and her scent was potent. They’d be able to find them easily and Ethan couldn’t afford to risk Irene’s life like that.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...