Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 103
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Third Person POV
Even in wolf form, it took Ethan almost all night to reach the rogue’s hideout, which was mainly just a house in the middle of nowhere. There were a couple of different rogue villages nearby, but the most dangerous rogues never lived amongst the others. They preferred solitude so they could fulfill all their sick fantasies. The thought of those greasy rogues touching what was his infuriated him.
He was planning on ripping out each of their throats and making them regret ever touching Judy Montague. All thought of anything else went out of the window as he forfeited control to his wolf. His wolf was still mated to Judy so he would be able to find her with ease. Ethan knew somewhat of the location these rogues were staying in, but once he got close, everything started to look the same and he got a bit turned around. His wolf on the other hand could pick up Judy’s scent with ease and was able to track her location to a T.
The house was a rundown shack in the darkest part of the forest where the fog never died. There was a dirty swamp in the distance and the entire area reeked of rogue. It made Ethan sick to his stomach, he swallowed the bile rising in his throat and reached the front of the house.
but
There were no rogues outside keeping guards, which was careless in his opinion, but he didn’t complain. He burst through the door and ran through the house, trying to pick up Judy’s scent. He was able to pick it up quickly and ran through the basement door, running down the stairs.
Her scent was so potent, it nearly brought his wolf to his knees. There was something else in her scent that caused Ethan to halt his tracks; the scent was filled with desires and lust.
Holy shit.
Judy was in heat!
What the actual fuck was going on around here? How could his mate be in heat around a bunch of unmated male rogues? Fury rose inside of him when he heard the taunting of the rogues. They were laughing and high–fiving one another like they were a bunch of frat boys about to get laid.
“That aphrodisiac worked fast,” he heard one of them laughing. “I call dibs first.”
“Relax, we will all get a turn with her…”
Ethan’s cock. He didn’t want
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...