Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 102
Chapter 0102
“Goddamit, she’s fucking annoying,” the rogue said, ferring to Irene. “I got to shut her up. Give me that wolfsbane syringe. I’ll give her some more and make her pass out again. She was cuter asleep.” “No!!” Irene screamed, tears streaming down her cheeks as she squirmed and tried to fight.
I whipped my head back quickly and got the rogue that was holding me right in the face. He cussed loudly and I could smell the stench of blood running down his nose. I smirked, satisfied that I was able to hurt him, but when he punched me in the stomach as retaliation, I vomited on the ground. He stood over me in triumph as he tossed me aside like I was a bag of trash.
“Judy!” Irene cried.
Another rogue tossed a syringe, and he jabbed it into the nape of Irene’s neck. As she continued to squirm and scream, I could see her resolve breaking and then she let out a breath and fell limp against the ground.
The rogue hovering over her smirked and stood to his feet before turning to look at me; his eyes were dark and his lips turned upward in a smirk.
“Why don’t we just kill them and get it over with,” the rogue that I head–butted said; he was still trying to stop the bleeding and he looked furious. I felt my head aching and I knew I hurt myself during that fight, but I refused to get up and appease these assholes.
“You heard the boss; they decided to be here when we killed them,” the rogue staring at me said. “They won’t get here for another hour, so we have to keep them alive until then.”
“So, what do we do? They are awake and this one seems feisty.”
“Screw you,” I said through my teeth as I lifted my head to glare at him.
His hand movement was so fast, I barely saw it coming. But I felt the sting of the punch as his fist made contact with my cheek. I tasted blood pooling in my mouth almost immediately and I let my body fall back to the ground limply.
“Shut the fuck up,” he hissed at me.
“She’s not as annoying as the other one,” he murmured. “But she’s tough.”
“She’s hot,” another one said, his tone filled with lust. “I have a better idea. Hold on a second.”
He quickly left while the others continued to talk about my looks and how they wanted to have their way with me. I felt disgusted even being around them; I spit blood out onto the ground and rolled over onto
back. I had to breathe through the pain; with these cuffs wrapped around my wrist and the wolfsbane that they injected me with last night, my healing was much slower. I hadn’t even heard or felt my wolf the entire time we’d been here, and I would be lying if I said I wasn’t worried about her.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...