Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 101
Chapter 0101
Chapter 0101
Judy’s POV
The night passed slowly; I wasn’t able to make any progress on our escape. Not that I thought we could escape, but I thought maybe I could find a weak point in the cage or have some kind of plan before the morning. Without there being any windows, it was difficult to know for sure what time it was.
Irene leaned against me, and she ended up falling asleep from all the crying she’d been doing. But I wasn’t able to bring myself to actually fall asleep. I stayed awake the entire night, and when I heard the footsteps creaking on the floorboards above us, I made Irene lie down on the ground, while I lay beside her. I was still hoping they wouldn’t touch us if they thought we were asleep.
Whoever sent them after us wanted us to know why we were captured, and they wanted our reactions filmed. I wasn’t going to give them what they wanted closed my eyes and forced my heart to stop beating as quickly as it was. I needed to calm myself down if I wanted to pull this off.
As time passed, I heard the footsteps getting closer, and soon the basement door was opening. The scent of rogue
filled my nose, and I started to grow nauseous from it. I could hear their murmured voices as they descended the stairs and walked their way towards us.
“Are they seriously still out?” One of them grunted. “How much of that stuff did you give them?”
“Enough to knock them out for a few hours. They should have been awake by now.”
“Do you think they are faking?” Another one asked.
“Go in there and find out.”
My entire body went rigid at the sounds of that. They were going to come into the cage and find out if we were lying about being passed out? Irene was asleep right now and if she felt them near us, she might wake up. I worried about what they were going to do.
I heard the cage door unlocking and then heavy footsteps made their way over to me. I felt cold fingers on the nape of my neck, trying to find a pulse.
“She’s alive,
“he said; his voice was so close to my ear that I had to stifle a shudder.
Then I felt his fingers trailing down my neck and across my exposed shoulders. His touch burned my flesh, and I hated the feeling of him this close to me.
“She’s a looker,” he said in a raspy tone like he was trying hard to keep himself together. “I could have at little fun with her before I kill her.”
“We could take turns,” another one said from a distance.
I wanted to open my eyes, just so I could see how many rogues there were, but I wasn’t about to expose myself just yet.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...