Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 77
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“Allow me to demonstrate?” He asked, stepping around me. He walked over to the archery set and placed the quiver on his back. He grabbed an arrow from the quiver picked up the bow off the ground and walked over to the target; he stood a distance from the target.
He placed the arrow in the bow and released the string. It hit its bullseye within seconds. I was about to tell him that he was pretty close to the target and a toddler could do that. But then he stepped away from the target, gaining more distance and he repeated the process, slicing the initial arrow in the middl
I gasped, never seeing an arrow get destroyed like that
He continued to take numerous steps back and then destroyed the current arrow on the target. Not before long, he was halfway across the field; he pulled the string back and released the arrow. It flew through the air before I could blink, and I heard the cracking of the arrow that was already on the target; the new arrow sliced it right down the middle.
Broken arrows continued to pile up on the ground as he continued to slice through each one. By the time he reached the last arrow, he was completely on the other side of the field. I could barely even see him with how far away he was. Even Irene was squinting in the distance to try to get a glimpse of him.
Soon, the arrow was flying straight through the sky and smacking the target with all its force, not only did the arrow already on the target practically explode, but the entire target fell to the ground, mak all of us jump in shock.
My mouth nearly hit the ground. I looked off in the distance to see Walter running back towards us; his blond curls blowing in the wind and his shirt was now off, revealing his muscly and toned body. He smirked as he neared us and when he stopped in front of us, it seemed as if he didn’t even break sweat. “That was awesome!!” Mat exclaimed. “How did you do that??”
“Years of practice,” Walter said, rubbing the top of his head. “I can teach you sometime.”
“Yes, please!!” He practically begged.
I folded my arms across my chest and stared up at him.
“That was quite impressive,” I said, raising my brows at him. “But you owe us a new set of arrows.”
He grinned and pulled his phone out of his pocket; he dialed a number and then pressed the phone to his cheek
“Get me a new bow and arrow set; the best you can find,” he ordered whoever was on the other end of the line. “Send them to my uncle’s Villa.”
He hung up without another word.
“You really do have connections,” I said, eyeing him carefull
“I never claim to be anyone that I’m not,” he said, histone low
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...