Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 76
Chapter 0076
Judy’s POV
I wasn’t blind. The guy who was hanging out in the parlor with Irene and Ethan was incredibly attractive. He was also kind of familiar–looking. He was looking at me as if I was the only person in the world and it made my cheeks burn.
I blinked a few times and offered him a small smile before quickly leaving the room and rejoining Ma outside. He was throwing daggers at the dummies. His form had improved over time. When I approached, he stopped and took the water bottle I offered him.
“Do you know who if Irene was expecting company today?” I asked, sitting on the grass beside him.
He looked towards the villa and thought about it for a moment, and then recognition flashed in his eyes.
“My cousin Walter is visiting for the month,” Matt answered. “I only met him once, but I think he’s supposed to be here at some point today.”
I furrowed my brows as I thought about that, and then I realized why he looked so familiar,
“Walter Landry? The French journalist?” I asked, raising my brows.
I knew of Walter Landry of course, but I thought it was just a coincidence that his last name was the same as Gavin’s. I didn’t know he was actually related to Gavin Landry and his family. But Matt nodded his head and peeked up at me.
“Yes,” he answered. “You’ve heard of him?”
“Of course, I’ve heard of him. His work is incredible,” I said, shaking my head thoughtfully. “I can’t believe you are actually related to him.”
“His last name is Landry,” Matt said with a smirk.
“Yeah, but I thought it was a coincidence,” I admitted. “What’s he doing here?”
Matt went to answer, but a new voice sounded from behind me, making my entire body freeze.
“I’m after my next new story. Do you have any leads for me, Miss Montague?”
I whipped around to face Walter walking towards us; the sun shined its rays down on him and he looked like an angel glowing in fluorescent lighting. He was handsome for sure, but not as handsome as Gavin. The family resemblance was definitely evident though.
I blinked a few times, trying to regain my focus and mentality.
andry, it’s an honor to meet you,” I said, holding; out my hand to shake his.
He looked at my hand for a moment and then smirked before taking hold of it; his hand was warm in mine. He didn’t shake my hand, but instead, he brought it to his lips and kissed the top of it gently.
“No need for formalities. You can call me Walter,” he assured me
“Then you can call me Judy,” I replied.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...