Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 66
Chapter 0066
Judy’s POV
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I thought Gavin would have taken me home first and then gone home with the others, so I was surprised when he dropped Irene, Matt, and Ethan off at the villa first. As soon as they left the car and shut the door behind them, Beta Taylor rolled up the window separating the backseat from the front seat.
I furrowed my brows and glanced at Gavin who was facing forward and avoiding my eyes.
“Did you make me go out to dinner with you and your family just to rub Ethan’s relationship in my face?” I found myself asking, my tone unwavering.
“You needed to see that they are together and nothing you do is going to break them apart,” Gavin said, his voice void of all emotions.
“And you think I want to break them apart?” I asked. “I don’t want anything to do with Ethan
“Good, so it should be easy for you to stay away from him then, right?” He asked, turning his head to face me; his eyes pouring into
mine as if he was staring into my soul.
I found myself paralyzed as I stared back at him, almost captivated by him.
“Right,” I answered, my voice coming out breathy.
Before I knew what was happening, Gavin was cupping the back of my head, keeping me still as he lowered himself to eye level. He was so close to me, that I could feel his warm breath brushing across my lips. My eyes tried to flutter shut, but I desperately fought to keep them open, not wanting to give in to the sweet temptation that was clouding my mind. But Gavin Landry made it almost impossible to resist. My heart was hammering so wildly against my ribcage, I thought it was going to beat out of my chest.
“Let’s get one thing straight, Miss Montague,” he said, his voice deep and making my legs weak. “If my daughter gets hurt because of your antics with her fiancé, I will be holding go easy on you. Nothing and nobody is more important than my family.”
you accountable and I won’t
“You don’t even like Ethan. So, why do you want her with him so badly?” I asked, my voice barely above a whisper. I knew I shouldn’t have asked that question, because it doesn’t make me look good. It almost makes me sound like a homewrecker, but I couldn’t help myself.
Since I’ve been around Gavin and Ethan, it’s clear that Gavin doesn’t like him. I mean, he almost killed him earlier. If I hadn’t reminded him that Irene would be upset if Ethan was hurt, he probably would have killed him. I couldn’t understand why a father would want his daughter to be with someone he couldn’t stand.
As soon as the question left my lips, Gavin’s face darkened, and he released his hold on the back of my
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...