Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 65
Chapter 0065
Ethan nodded, his eyes dark and I could see that he was pissed, but he was biting his tongue.
“Yes, Alpha,” he rasped out.
He quickly left the parlor and went into the kitchen. Judy stood her ground, her eyes finding mine, searching for something… but I wasn’t sure what.
“Are you proud of yourself?” I asked her; I couldn’t help but look at her with disgust. “Was that your goal? To prove that you still had him in the palm of your hand?”
She blinked at me.
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“Are you serious?” She asked, raising her brows. “I didn’t ask for that to happen. He attacked me; he kept me pressed against the wall despite my efforts to get him to release me. He wouldn’t let me go.” “And you expect me to believe that?” I asked, shaking my head. “It seems every time I turn my back, you and Ethan find your way back to each other. Is that a coincidence?”
She pressed her lips together and stared into my eyes
“I didn’t ask for that to happen, nor did I want it to happen,” she said slowly. “But you can think what you want.”
She started to walk away but I grabbed her arm.
“We aren’t done here-“1
Just as I was about to say more, the door swung open, and Irene walked in with Ethan and Matt behind her. She paused when she saw us and she frowned, stating between the two of us before her eyes landed on my hand still wrapped around Judy’s forearm.
“Am I interrupting something?” She asked, raising her brows.
I released Judy’s arm as if she had just burned me.
“No,” I said sharply. “We were just talking. Is everything okay?”
Irene bit her lip and then nodded.
“The dinner was burnt pretty badly,” she said, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. “The maids said they can cook another meal for us, but it’ll take some time to prepare.”
“Tell them not to bother. We can just go out to dinner tonight,” I told her.
Her eyes grew large, and she glanced over her shoulder at Matt who was bouncing in his shoes excitedly. “Like a family dinner?” Matt asked.
I nodded; it’s been a while since I took my family out to a meal in public. It would be a nice change; I suppose by default, I’d have to take Ethan as well though.
“That’s a great idea,” Irene said, a sweet smile on her ps. “Judy, you should come too. You haven’t eaten all day, and you must be hungry.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...