Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 554
Gavin’s POV
“Pregnant?” Both Rachel and I said at the same exact time.
“How is that possible?” I asked, my eyes darting to Rachel. “Who had you been with since coming here?”
“Are you serious right now??” She asked, her cheeks flushing. “Do you seriously think I had been with anybody other than you??”
“We didn’t…” I started to say, but she held up her hand, her eyes growing colder.
“You literally woke up naked with me in bed next to you,” she said, cutting me off. “Don’t you remember our time at The Grand Hotel?”
I felt bile rising up in my throat. I was still convinced that Judy was the one I had been with that night, but when I woke up, it was Rachel’s naked body that was beside me, and her marks all over me that branded me for a few days. I was glad that they were finally gone, but now it seems we have an even bigger problem at hand.
“No, even if that’s true, I’m always careful,” I say, refusing to believe that I got Rachel pregnant.
“We were so drunk,” Rachel said. “Neither of us was careful that night, Gavin.”
“From the results, it seems she’s a little over 2 weeks pregnant,” Dr. Peirce continued, her eyes fixed on the file and not at all on our faces.
“See?” Rachel said, a smirk on her face. “That’s the same time as the Grand Casino Hotel.”
“Excuse me for a minute,” I said, turning and walking towards the door.
“Gavin, where do you think you are going?!” Rachel asked, annoyance clear in her tone.
“I need to make a phone call,” I told her over my shoulder without looking back.
Once I was in the hallway, I let out a breath I hadn’t known I was holding. I reached into my pocket and pulled out my phone. I brought up Taylor's contact number and clicked the call button, bringing the phone to my cheek.
“Alpha,” Taylor greeted on the phone; he knew right away that this wasn’t a personal call.
“Okay, don’t need that many details,” Taylor interrupted. “Get to the end of it.”
I rolled my eyes.
“I woke up the next morning with Rachel in my bed instead of Judy. We were both naked, and I had hickeys all over my body. She had hickeys all over her as well that I knew were from me. Her perfume was all over the suite, though I could still smell the lingering scent of Judy as well, so I knew she was there.”
“Did you talk to Judy about it?”
“Of course I talked to Judy about it,” I snapped. “She denies being there. I don’t know why she’s denying it, but she’s adamant about keeping it from me. I decided not to push her, and I just walked away.”
“That was stupid,” Taylor muttered as he continued to type on his computer. “What time was the meeting again? 6 pm?”
“Yes.”
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....