Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 552
Judy’s POV
I should have known that’s where he had gone this morning. He had sex with me last night and then left to be with another woman. My heart was shattered, and I hated that he affected me so much. Nan, feeling my mood shift, wrapped an arm through mine and gave me a reassuring squeeze.
“I’m sure it’s nothing,” she whispered to me.
She wasn’t meaning for Erik to hear it, but with wolf hearing, he heard her clear as day. He glanced at me through the mirror with a small frown.
“She’s in the hospital,” he clarified, drawing my attention to him.
“What?” I asked, raising my brows.
“Rachel,” he clarified. “She’s in the hospital. He went to make sure she was okay. Taylor called him this morning and told him about it. That’s all I really know, though.”
My heart thudded against my chest; many different scenarios played out in my head.
“What happened?” I asked. “Why is she in the hospital?”
“You’d have to ask him,” he replied. “I’m not entirely sure.”
“That’s all the information you have?!” I practically shouted; I was aware that I was acting stupid. This wasn’t Erik’s fault, nor was it his problem. I wasn’t being fair to him, and the look Nan was giving me told me she agreed with my internal monologue.
“It’s not my business to know these things, Judy,” he said with a sigh, his attention on the road. “You’ll have to ask him later.”
I sat back in the seat.
“Sorry, Erik,” I said softly. “I don’t mean to take my frustration out on you.”
He nodded but didn’t say anything more.
Soon, we were arriving at the school. We said our goodbyes to Erik before heading through the campus grounds. The school was packed with students who were cramming for their finals last minute.
“I’m so nervous,” Nan admitted. “I know we are prepared and all, but still.”
I nodded in agreement.
“Yeah, I’m a bit nervous too. This is kind of a huge deal.”
“Hey, Judy,” Lukas said as we entered the student lounge. “Did you get anymore studying done this weekend?”
I knew this material inside and out, so I wasn’t sure why I was so nervous.
Maybe because my head was a bit clouded and I knew this distraction could be detrimental. The teacher walked into the classroom, putting his briefcase on his desk and then turning to the class as more students started to fill the seats.
“Welcome to your final day in this class,” he announced. “Shall we begin?”
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Gavin’s POV
I hated having to leave Judy this morning to go to the hospital. I couldn’t even see Rachel when I first got there because she was being examined by the doctor. I paced the living room, my heart practically in my throat.
I grabbed my phone, about to text Judy, when the doorway to the emergency room opened and Dr. Pierce walked out.
“Alpha, she’s ready now,” she announced. ‘You can come see her.”
I let out a breath and nodded as I followed her through the doors and towards the room Rachel was in.
Rachel was sitting up in bed; she didn’t look like someone who should be in a hospital. She looked perfectly fine. When her eyes met mine, there was a flash of something in them that I didn’t recognize.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....