Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 509
Judy’s POV
Irene was right; I was not the type of person to sit around and mope because of a guy. I was the kind of person who would go and get answers, especially considering nobody is willing to provide me with answers anyway.
I was beyond frustrated with the situation, and I needed to know what was up. I was having trouble believing he just up and ditched me for another woman, and if he did, it was time that I gave him a piece of my mind. After Irene got Emalyn changed and settled, and said my goodbyes to her and asked Chester for a ride to the villa. He was happy to give me a ride, having heard what happened from Nan, I didn’t have to retell him the story of my earlier events.
“Are you sure you want to do this?” Chester asked, sounding a bit worried as we approached the villa. “It’s not too late to turn around.”
“I need answers, Chester,” I told him. “It’s going to eat at me if I don’t…”
“But what if you don’t like the answers that you receive?” he asked, echoing the very fear that’s in my head.
I swallowed the lump in my throat.
“Then I guess I’ll at least have an answer, and I won’t be sitting at home wondering,” I told him, my voice dropping to a low whisper.
He remained quiet for the rest of the drive; I could feel the uncertainty radiating off him, and it was starting to seep into me. The closer we got, the more I started to doubt this plan. He pulled into the villa driveway and continued until we reached the designated guest parking area.
I didn’t see Gavin’s car parked in its usual spot, which made me wonder if he was even home. If not, I guess I would be waiting for him.
I unbuckled my seatbelt and started to get out.
“Stay here,” I told Chester. I need to do this alone.”
“Are you sure this is a good idea?” He asked, his tone laced with worry. “Nan would kill me if anything happened to you.”
Though she wore heels that made her appear taller than her normal height, Gavin was still taller. He walked around the car, the look of admiration clear in his eyes as he offered the woman his arm. She took it without hesitation, a smile lighting up her face and that same admiration reflecting back at him.
He leaned in to kiss her cheek, further shattering my heart. As he spoke in a low tone for only her to hear, his eyes darted in my direction as if he felt my gaze on his, and then I watched eh color drain from his face.
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Gavin’s POV
A few days ago.
I sat in the restaurant, my eyes never leaving Judy’s curious face as I clutched the phone tightly in my hands. I thought I was going to break the phone with how tightly I was holding it. I couldn’t get Taylor’s words out of my head for a long while as I remained on the phone with him, trying to process what it was he was saying to me right now.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....