Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 44
Chapter 0044
Judy’s POV
There was clear sadness in my father’s eyes as he watched me plead for my mother. I knew it was breaking his heart that he couldn’t be there with her to hold and comfort her. He used to tell me stories about the first time he ever saw her and how in love he was. He knew right away that she was his fated mate even before his wolf told him. There wasn’t a day that went by that I didn’t feel the love that they had for one another.
He lifted his arms to show me the silver cuffs around his wrists and I grimaced, seeing the burn marks the silver had left on him. Silver was dangerous against werewolves and blocked the wolves from the humans.
“I’ve been blocked from your mother, so I can’t feel her,” my father told me sadly. “Mates aren’t meant to be apart like this, so her wolf is probably in agony, taking your mother with her. I wish there was something I could do, but there isn’t. Not while I’m in here at least. The most you can do right now is to be there for her and remind her that you love her.”
I nodded as tears filled my eyes.
I didn’t want to tell him that every time I tried to speak to my mother the only thing, she wanted to talk about was Ethan and how I was disrespectful towards him. I didn’t want to tell him that my fated mate is engaged to be married to another woman and in order for him to help our family, I need to be his mistress and drop out of school.
My stomach twisted at the very thought.
My father was going through enough as it was and didn’t need this type of drama in his life as well.
“I love you, Dad,” I settled on, giving him a sad smile. “And I miss you every day.”
“I love you too, Judy,” he said in return.
He reached his hand over to touch mine which was resting on the table but the guard cleared his throat.
“No touching.”
My father sighed and leaned back in his seat.
“How have you been? How’s school going?” He asked.
I bit my lower lip; I wanted to tell him about my new job, I wanted to tell somebody. I needed someone to talk to. But I couldn’t because of that contract Gavin made me sign
“School’s going great,” I told him. “I even got a tutoring job. It pays decent. I’m saving so I can get you out of prison.”
He gave me a sad smile and sighed..
“Don’t waste your money on me, Judy. Besides, I don’t think a tutoring job is going to be enough to pay the debt owed.”
I couldn’t tell him how much I was actually making at this job because then he would ask me more questions about it and I couldn’t answer any of his possible questions
“Time is up,” the guard said, interrupting my thoughts.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...