Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 43
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Nan had a good idea during dinner to maybe go and see my father in prison; perhaps he could give me some insight on how to handle his mate. I wasn’t sure if that was something I was ready for. But after I got out of school the next day, I decided to give it a shot and see if I could speak with my father.
“Sorry, Mam. We were told not to let you enter,” one of the guards at the front entrance of the person said, folding his arms across his chest.
I frowned, staring up at him with confusion on his face.
“I’m sorry, what?” I asked, confused. “It’s a prison. I’m in the visitor section; I have every right to be here. I need to see my father.”
His frown deepened as he took a look at his clipboard and then he shook his head.
“I have strict instructions to keep Judy Montague away from the prison,” he told me. “There’s nothing I can do about it. I’m sorry but I’m going to have to ask you to leave!
I was about to open my mouth and say something again, but another voice sounded behind me.
“And who exactly gave you those orders? If it was any type of Alpha, I assure you, they did not get the permission of my father before stating such a rule. Is there a reason my friend can’t visit with her own father?” Irene asked, folding her arms across her chest.
“L… uh… Miss Landry,” the guard stammered, bowing his head to Irene. “W…what are you doing here?”
“I happened to be driving by when I saw Judy entering the prison. I followed her to see what she was doing, and I happened to overhear your conversation,” she confessed. “Now I’m going to ask you again… why can’t she visit with her own father?”
I was shocked that Irene was here, and she was helping me I had a feeling I knew who gave the guards the order, he most likely paid them off too. It was Ethan Something from the way the guard was looking at her, I could tell he didn’t want to tell her this information either. Everybody now knew she was engaged to him and upsetting Irene was not in this guard’s best interest.
He glanced at me and then back at Irene.
“I didn’t know you two were friends,” he said with a nervos laugh. “Of course, she can see her father. I was mistaken.”
He stepped aside, allowing me entrance into the prison.
I looked at Irene who was still staring at the guard. I wanted to say something to her, but the words failed me. Instead, I nodded my head at her and then walked past the guard and into the prison–Another guard walked me into the visitor center where I sat at a table, nervously fiddling with my fingers until the doors swung open and my father walked into the room.
“No touching,” one of the guards on standby instructed me
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...