Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 413
Judy’s POV
I was quick to react. Nan jumped out of her seat, and I jumped in front of her to keep Harper from hurting her. It wasn’t difficult to stop Harper’s attack because she was drunk and sloppy in her movements. She nearly fell over by the time she even remotely reached Nan.
I had Harper pinned to the ground with ease; she screamed out in frustration as I quickly got the upper hand.
Hearing the commotion, Chester quickly ran into the room, his eyes wild as his wolf fought to take control, already sensing that his mate was in danger. The second he saw Nan standing off to the side, her eyes wide as she watched me tackle Harper, he relaxed slightly knowing she was safe, but then once his eyes found Harper, he was furious.
“What the fuck do you think you are doing??” Chester asked, approaching us, his eyes never leaving Harpers. “Why are you here, Harper? You were fired.”
Tears continued to fall down Harper’s cheeks; when I didn’t think she would attack Nan again, I finally released her.
“I came to get my stuff,” she said, her bottom lip trembling. “But when I saw her here…I just snapped.”
“You need to leave before the security team throws you out,” Chester said, folding his arms across his chest.
She sniffled and wiped at her tear-soaked eyes.
“I’ll help you with your things,” I told her as I stood up from the ground, pulling her to her feet as well. My heart went out to Harper in a way; I didn’t like the fact that she wanted to fight my best friend every chance she got, but I did feel bad that she was so heartbroken.
I knew she had feelings for Chester for a long time and now it was being ripped away from her. Chester stayed behind with Nan and Sammy as I went towards Harper's old bedroom. Once we were in her room, she broke down into more tears. She was a complete mess, and I hated that it was happening to her.
“I’m so sorry, Harper,” I whispered, stepping towards her.
“No, you aren’t,” she murmured. “How could you be? You’re taking her side over mine.”
She started to grab her things, rummaging through the room to make sure Beta Taylor didn’t forget anything.
“Of course, I’m taking her side; she’s my best friend,” I say, sitting on the edge of the bed. “But that doesn’t mean I’m not feeling remorseful about what you are going through. I wish there was something I could do that didn’t require hurting my best friend.”
“I’ve loved him for so long,” she whispered. “Ever since he moved to the Silver Crescent pack. It just doesn’t seem fair.”
“Nan is his fated mate. You had to know the possibility of that happening.”
She frowned deeply as she narrowed her eyes at me.
“I thought he would have rejected her,” she admitted. “Like I rejected mine for him…”
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....