Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 41
Chapter 0041
“He put you to bed?” She asked, I could hear the smile in her voice.
“In the most nonsexual way possible,” I told her. “I was still fully clothed.”
“Ouch,” she murmured.
“What am I going to do, Nan? I made a complete fool out of myself in front of a Lycan‘
“You were drunk, you can’t blame yourself for something you did while drunk. I’m sure Gavin Landry will understand,” she assured me, trying to sound reassuring, but I could tell she was uncertain as well. “Besides, it’s not like you are trying to impress the Lycan.”
I chewed the inside of my cheek and internally groaned. I couldn’t tell her that Gavin was my boss and that I needed to impress him and keep him happy in order to keep my job.
“I suppose,” I murmured; she could hear the uncertainty clear in my tone though and she sighed.
“We don’t have school today, do you have tutoring?” She asked.
“No,“I told her. “Thankfully, it’s my day off.”
“Good; we need a girl’s day! Let’s go into the city and do some shopping.”
I rolled my eyes.
“I don’t have shopping money, Nan,” I reminded her.
“Then, let’s window shop and get some dinner,” she suggested. “I have to get a few things anyways and I could use some company. Please… I miss you and I want to hang out‘
“You saw me yesterday,” I chuckled.
“It’s not the same and you know it,” she muttered “I want to hang out not in a school setting.”
“Okay,” I relented. “Let’s hang out today. Let me just get dressed.”
“I’ll pick you up in an hour!”
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The hour flew by quickly, by the time I finished getting dressed for the afternoon, Nan was already pulling into the driveway. I grabbed my purse, shouldering it, and quickly ran out of the house to greet Nan.
She was smiling at me from the driver’s seat when I slid into the passenger’s seat.
“How’s your mom doing?” She asked as she pulled away from the house and headed towards the city.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...