Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 40
Chapter 0040
Judy’s POV
What in the world happened last night? How did I end up back in my bed? I looked around with a frown, seemed unchanged, but there was a lingering scent that caused my heart to beat rapidly in my chest My head was killing me from all the alcohol I drank last night. Why the hell would I drink so much?
nothing
I slipped out of bed and walked into my bathroom; I gasped when I saw my disheveled appearance. My hair was a mess, my makeup was smeared across my face. I had dark circles under my eyes, and I was so pale. I touched my face and sighed. I felt like death and now I looked like death too.
Groaning, I splashed some cold water onto my face. Memories of last night started to come back to me and I gasped as I staggered backward.
I remembered vaguely one of the Alphas getting me drunk and trying to take me away from the ceremony. Then I remembered Gavin appearing and getting me out of there.
He took me back to his car and then
Oh, Goddess… no.
Panic struck me as the memory slammed into my head.
I threw myself at him!
Was he the one who brought me home?
Well, I was no longer pale. I was now multiple shades of red and I felt completely and utterly sick. I staggered out of the bathroom, unable to look myself in the face any longer. All I could see when I looked into my own eyes was shame.
My purse was sitting on the end of the bed; now I was understanding why my room had a different and yet familiar scent to it. It was Gavin’s scent.
My heart skipped a beat knowing that he was inside of my bedroom. Another wave of shame hit me when I looked around at all the clothes on my floor. I hadn’t had time to clean up this past week and I was seriously regretting
that now.
I reached into my purse and grabbed my phone; it was almost dead because it hadn’t been charged all night. As soon as I put it on the charger, the screen lit up and I saw that I had some text messages from Nan.
Nan: Where are you? You told me you were getting a drink and then you disappeared.
Nan: Please tell me you are alive.
Nan: I’m going to call the police, Judy! Seriously, where are you??
Nan: Okay, someone told me that Gavin took you home. Are you okay? How much did you have to drink?
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...