Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 344
Judy’s POV
I hate sitting here like a waiting duck; it was only Tabby and me while everyone else went to search for more flags. Tabby was staring out at the ocean, watching the waves jolting the canoes we needed to take to get off this island. There were three in total for our team, just enough to get back to base.
We’ve been sitting here for a few hours; the sun beaming down on us, making our jobs incredibly hot and difficult. I felt the sun burning into my flesh and I knew I’d have sunburn by the time I left this place. I hated having such fair skin.
Sighing, I lay back on the sand, staring up at the blue skies; there were some clouds in the sky, but not enough to provide us with some shade.
“When do you think we’ll get to go back?” Tabby asks, pulling her attention from the ocean to look at me.
I opened my mouth to answer, but the ruffling on a bush turned my attention to the wooded area. I quickly sat up; my eyes narrowed as I stared off into the forest. Tabby was also standing at attention, her eyes narrowed, and her breathing halted to almost nothing.
There was somebody here and they didn’t smell like a teammate.
Neither of us spoke, we stared and listened for any signs of movement. And then it happened again; this time, I was on my feet. My heartbeat was rapid with both worry and excitement. Perhaps this wasn’t a boring job after all; maybe Sherry was right, and the other teams would try to get our flags.
Soon, multiple different competitors were emerging from the forest, their eyes narrowed and determination crossing their faces as they stared at us. One of them, the largest one, looked around for a moment, and then a smirk spread across his lips when he spotted us.
“They left two of the smallest girls on their team to watch over their flags?” He laughed, making the other’s chuckle as well. One of the guys who I had fought with before had gone completely pale at the sight of me and I provided him with a “not so innocent” smirk.
He opened his mouth to say something to the others, but then he clamped his lips shut. He ended up disappearing without any of his teammates noticing. He was smart to leave because he knew exactly what I was capable of.
The others though, not so much.
They had only seen me passing; too consumed with their own fights to notice me. I never got the chance to combat with them. Which was fine because they were about to learn today.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....