Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 334
Chapter 334
Chapter 0334 Judys POV When I returned to the camp , Tabby was the one who greeted me first .
Are you okay ? She asked , rushing toward me .
I wasnt sure what to say .
I was fine now , though I was a bit sore from the fight , all the wounds I had from it were completely healed .
I touched my neck , frowning at the memory .
Everything that happened felt like a dream .
The canines had sunk into my neck and the blade was digging into my flesh as well , but both wounds were completely healed , not even a scratch lingering in place .
Yeah , I breathed .
I think so … Im so sorry ! Allan , one of my teammates said as he rushed over to me .
I didnt know what else to do .
Im so sorry I ran and left you there ! Its okay .
At least you got the flag , I said , motioning for the second flag that Sherrie had stored with the first one .
Still , I shouldnt have left you there , he breathed , looking defeated .
No , you shouldnt have .
She could have died , Tabby said , folding her arms across her chest .
Allan looked defeated as he stared at the ground .
Im so sorry , he breathed again .
The food is almost ready , Sherry announced from the firepit they built .
By now , almost everyone was back .
Some were covered in blood and dirt , and others looked unscathed .
I didnt tell anyone about the random she wolf I encountered in the forest because truth be told , I wasnt even sure it was real .
I could have imagined the entire thing .
I didnt want them to think that I was crazy by telling them that a random she wolf who wasnt on our team saved me for no reason and then disappeared .
We ate fish and deer that were roasted over an open fire .
It was oddly delicious despite it not having any seasoning and the food combination not matching .
It appeased my wolf at least .
Some of us should get some rest and the others should start hunting for more flags tonight , Chuck announced .
Im not sure who made him the group leader , but nobody seemed to be arguing with him .
I think most didnt want the responsibility to be a leader and were happy that Chuck took the reins .
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....