Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 330
Chapter 330
Chapter 0330 Judys POV During the weekend we spent time doing training exercises Most of the time was spent in the gym and I barely had time to rest before the next weeks battles .
However , Tabby and I did spend a little time celebrating after we got our official notices that we moved on to the next round .
We also got our schedules for the upcoming week .
I was surprised that Group B doesnt start until Wednesday as opposed to Tuesday like last week .
By the time Wednesday came around , Group B , who were split into smaller teams this morning , was ready for the next match .
We didnt meet up at the arena like we did last week , instead , we were shuffled into buses and taken to the airfield where small planes sat , waiting for us .
There were three of them to be exact .
I glanced up at the sky and saw that the drones were already recording everything that was happening , so I knew the competition was starting .
Levi , Mica , Jeremy , and Gavin were already at the airfield by the time the buses dropped us off .
Gavins eyes immediately found mine as I joined my team .
Over the weekend when we were placed in these teams , we were given team shirts .
My group was red , which meant I wore a red shirt with the rest of my team .
There was also team blue and team green .
We were given a white flag , each with our names on it .
It was said to be proof of our surrendering and we were expecting to bring them with us during this next portion of the competition.
If we forgot the flag , we wouldnt be able to compete , and wed be eliminated .
Welcome to week two of the competition , Alpha Levi announced .
We didnt have the announcer because we werent in the arena , so Alpha Levi did the introduction .
The groups cheered and high fived one another for making it to the next round while others just looked nervous , nibbling on their nails and lips .
This week is crucial .
This proves your survival instincts and your hunting skills .
These planes are going to take each team to a different section of a deserted island .
We hid 5 of your team flags in the forest on the island and you are expected to collect all 5 and bring them back to base , which is the arena outside of the resort .
You have 48 hours to complete this task .
Murmurs erupted around me .
All the questions were the same .
Was it really going to take 48 hours to collect 5 flags per team ? We werent prepared to spend multiple days on a deserted island ; they didnt tell us to pack anything so I assumed this would only take a couple hours like the other matches last week .
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....