Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 321
Chapter 0319
My eyes found Gavin who wasn’t watching the fight with everyone else, he was watching me. His eyes remained on mine and for a moment, I saw a flicker of worry in them.
“What’s the plan?” Tabby asked, staring down at the ground. There were a few others who were trying to climb the tree as well, they weren’t as fast though, so I knew I had a bit of time to come up with something
With a pounding heart, I turned to her, glancing at her weapon.
“How many arrows do you have left?” I asked.
“About 3.” she told me. “I wasn’t able to collect the ones I used”
I nodded and stared down at the arena. There were a few really strong men who were fighting effortlessly, and I knew if I were to fight them one–on–one, I wouldn’t stand much of a chance. I was a skilled fighter, but I was aware that others were better than me and stronger.
If I wanted to make it out of here on top, I would need to eliminate those men.
“How’s your aim?” I asked her.
“Better than most,” she told me proudly.
I nodded as I grabbed the zipline handles.
“See those men over there,” I asked, pointing at the two who were ganging up on another woman who was struggling to maintain her stance.
Tabby nodded.
“Aim for them,” I told her. “I’m going to aim for those guys over there,” I said, pointing at another set of men who were fighting with one another.
She looked uncertain as she nibbled on her lower lip. The ones who had followed us were almost at the top of the tree. We didn’t have time to debate this any further.
“Grab my waist,” I ordered loudly.
Without hesitation, she grabbed a hold of my waist.
I jumped and allowed the zipline to take us through the air. Tabby grabbed her bow and arrow while keeping a tight hold on me and she aimed for the men I told her to aim for. She released the arrow, and it flew into the air, piercing one of the guys in the back of the shoulder, careful not to hit his heart.
He went down in an instant and she cheered at the sight.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....