Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 316
Chapter 0316
“You are confident. It could get you killed,” he told me.
“Then the other player will be eliminated,” I told him, shrugging a shoulder as I turned back to the knives. “This week yes,” Levi said, folding his arms across his chest. “But next week will be death matches and that
confidence of we won’t save you”
worry about that next week,” I replied simply without looking at him.
“I’ll worn
He was quiet for a moment before he barked out laughter, startling me once more. I turned to look at him and he ran his fingers through his hair.
“Well, you’ve certainly impressed me already Miss Montague,” he told me, turning to walk away. “I just hope you live to see the end.”
And with those parting words, he walked away.
I turned back to the knives, my mind already made up. I grabbed them and wandered back towards the others who were patiently waiting. While I stood with the others, I took my time putting the knives in certain parts of my attire. I wedged one in each of my combat boots, another in the back pocket of my legs, and others in each of my front pockets. The handles were black and blended in with my leggings well enough.
At that moment I was glad I chose the ones with the pockets.
Tabby saw me as I walked onto the arena with the others. She glanced behind me at the others who were carrying their weapons and practicing. Then her eyes studied me, noticing the knives in my boots and pockets, her eyes widening
“You got here early?” She asked when I approached
I nodded.
“Apparently, I was chosen as a top 5. We got to choose our weapons first,” I told her. “There’s limited supplies of each weapon so you better get there fast,” I proceeded to warn
“Congrats,” she said, a small frown on her lips. Her tone was almost dismissive, and I could tell her mind was elsewhere. I couldn’t tell if she was happy for me… or upsee “Well good luck out there,” she added as she sauntered over to the others who were lining up to choose their weapons next.
“Judy!” I turned to see Sammy walking towards me with a right smile. “Good luck today. I came to support you.”
I was surprised to see her; I thought she would be with her boyfriend supporting him, not supporting the competition.
“What about your boyfriend?” I asked. “Shouldn’t you be on his team?”
She shrugged.
“He’s Group A so he already went yesterday,” she explaine
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....