Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 310
Chapter 0310
Judy’s POV
This was probably a stupid plan. I mean, we were all wolf shifters, so Mica and Gavin could probably smell me. I closed my eyes and held my breath as I hid under Gavin’s hotel bed. I felt like a child, playing hide and seek, except I was naked. My clothes were tucked beneath me. I managed to grab them before I slid off the bed and rolled underneath it. I could hear the distinct voices at the doorway, though I wasn’t paying attention to what they were saying.
Gavin soon dismissed Mica, much to my relief. After the door was shut, Gavin waited a few moments. We both heard Alpha Mica’s footsteps retreating and I let out of the breath I had been holding. I still didn’t come out from under the bed though.
Truth be told, I was embarrassed.
This was such a stupid plan. Why did I think breaking into his hotel suite and laying in his bed naked while he wasn’t here was a good idea? I could feel the heat on my cheeks growing with each passing second. I heard Gavin’s footsteps getting closer to the bed and my heart pounded wildly against my ribcage.
Then, he stopped.
I wasn’t sure what he was doing, but I could see that his feet were only inches from me. I kind of hoped he would just go to the bathroom so I could slip out undetected, but I knew I wasn’t that lucky.
“Are you going to stay under there all night?” He asked, his voice deep.
I should have known that he knew I was here this whole time. I felt ridiculous hiding like that.
“Do you think maybe you can go to the bathroom?” I asked him, my voice coming out as a squeak.
“What?” He asked in return.
“I’d like to sneak out,” I whispered, my tone trembling. “But I can’t do that when you’re watching me. Can you Just go to the bathroom?”
At this point, I was desperate.
He was quiet for a long while; I thought maybe he would put me out of my misery and go into the bathroom so I could leave and pretend this terrible thing never happened. But when he didn’t make any effort to move, hope started to fade a little. I felt him nearing closer until he was only inches from me, and then he bent, getting a better look at me.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....