Chapter 0300
Judy’s POV
Tabby froze when she saw Gavin seated beside me against the tree. Her eyes were wide, and her cheeks were flushed. She immediately averted her eyes to the ground. Gavin jumped away from me in time, so Tabby didn’t actually see anything, but she knew she walked in on something… she just didn’t know what.
“Alpha…” she said softly, her face even redder as she spoke “I didn’t know you were over here…”
Gavin stood to his feet; his aura was intense. There was no doubt about his status. Tabby’s eyes grew wide, and her body trembled. It was difficult being around this much power up close and personal… especially when you aren’t used to it.
“I came to check on one of the recruits,” he told her, his eyes narrowed.
He was staring daggers at her; I could see the hidden threat in his eyes. I didn’t want him to frighten Tabby. She’s been so kind to me from the start and she’s tough as nails. I can tell she’ll be a fierce competitor. However, right now, in front of Gavin, she seemed like a scared pup. I felt bad… I knew Gavin was intimidating.
“We should go to the medic,” I said quickly. “Before the line gets too long. It’s first come first serve, right?”
Tabby nodded.
“There’s a ton of medics available,” she said softly, her eyes still focused on the ground in front of her. “But they are filling up fast with competitors. Everyone wants to get in and out.”
I nodded in agreement.
“Okay, then let’s go,” I said as I started to walk away and towards the treeline.
I froze for a moment when I felt Gavin’s eyes on the back of my head. I turned and gave him a polite smile with a mock bow. “Thank you for helping me, Alpha Landry,” I said, making sure to slip in a sly grin as I bowed my head again.
He stared at me for a moment, and I could tell he was trying to choose his words carefully.
“I’ll be seeing you,” he settled on.
I nodded my head once and followed Tabby out of the forest Nan was the first person I saw upon returning outside the locker rooms. She ran to me and wrapped me in her arms.
“You were badass,” Nan squealed. “I totally thought you were going to crash and burn.”
“Honestly, I did too,” I admitted.
“Nice job,” the guy, Tyler said. I hadn’t noticed him standing there until he spoke. He put a hand on Nan’s shoulder and stepped closer to her. He was taller than her with broad shoulders and I could tell he probably had nice abs. I looked at Nan questionably and she looked everywhere but at me. She also seemed tense, like his touch. bothered her.
It should bother her; she had a mate. Sure, things were rocky right now, but still…
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....