Chapter 0285
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1 caught wind of a couple of girls speaking at the table next to mine. I took riote of how the girls interacted with one another. The way one of them had her leg bouncing and the other kept tapping her fingers on the table. Every little detail mattered because it could help when it counted the more. The competition didn’t start in the pit, it started the second the plane landed in this country.
Every moment was part of the competition, and I had to be careful with what I did and who I spoke to.
I felt a presence beside me and when I turned, I froze
Theo was seated beside me. He had a grin on his face as he looked down at me and my stomach twisted. I knew he was going to be a problem these next few weeks.
“What are you doing?” I asked in a whisper.
He grabbed the nameplate off the seat and showed it to me my eyes grew wide when I realized that was his seat. Of course, it was, I shouldn’t have been surprised that this was my luck.
So, are you seeing anyone?” He asked against my ear, making me instinctively pull away.
“That’s not any of your concern,” I told him, avoiding his gaze.
“Well, what if I wanted to take you out?” He asked, that grin never leaves his face.
He was so full of himself.
“I don’t date the competition,” I told him, my eyes narrowed as I finally looked up to meet his eyes. He was sitting way too close to me for my comfort.
I heard something slamming and shattering across the room, making much of the room, including me, jump. I turned to see Gavin standing with the eyes of his wolf shining. He smashed his plate. Food was everywhere on the table; even the other Lycans were staring at him, their mouths agape.
The only one who wasn’t looking at him was Alpha Levi. He was sipping on his wine with a smug look on his face. Had he said something to Gavin to make him angry? The room had fallen so silent that you could hear a pin drop.
“What’s going on?” Theo asked.
“I’m not sure,” I replied, my heart in my throat. Gavin wasn’t looking at me, more like staring at the room as a whole. He looked down at his plate and muttered something, keeping his tone low enough that not even I could hear him.
He turned and stormed out of the room without a single lock. My chest tightened. I had a strange urge to follow him to make sure he was okay or didn’t get himself in any trouble. He was clearly mad about something, and it disrupted the entire room.
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....