Chapter 0282
Judy’s POV
“Are you sure your foot is okay?” Nan asked as she followed me around our suite. It was later In the evening, the first round of the competition ended. I managed to see about an hour of it after I left the resort urgent care. Nan and I found some empty seats in the audience and cheered on the first round of competitors.
Some had already gotten eliminated, and it was brutal to watch. I tried not to look at Gavin who sat with the other Lycans in the front row. I hated how good he looked and how badly I wanted of rip that suit off his body. The memory of his touch made my body tremble.
Did you hear me?” Nan asked, waiving her hand in front of my face, bringing me back to the present moment.
Sorry,” I said as I went to the closet. I grabbed a dress that brought and turned to look at her. “What did you say?
“I asked if you were sure your foot was okay. You don’t have to go to this dinner. You didn’t compete today.”
“I know, but I want to be there for support,” I told her. “You could always come with me.”
I promised some of the girls I’d go to a bar with them tonight,” Nan said pointing. “I’m sorry.”
“Go have fun; don’t worry about me,” I told her, hugging her. “And yes, my foot is fine. It’s already out of the
and it’s only been a few hours.”
I could still feel pain, but it wasn’t nearly as bad. If I go easy and don’t use it too much, then I’ll be fine and ready to compete tomorrow morning. I went to get dressed, and Nan helped me fix my hair and makeup. I wanted to make some good impressions at this dinner. Every night this week there was going to be a special dinner for the competitors. We didn’t have to go to them, but it left an impression.
After I said my goodbyes to Nan for the evening, I went straight to the party room. Once again, I had to follow the map, and a few times, I got horribly lost. Eventually, I found the room where the event was being held.
Gavin’s POV
“You definitely want to go to this dinner?” Derek asked with a timid frown on his face as he stared at me.
The elevator doors opened, and I stepped out with Derek following closely behind me. The Paparazzi snapped pictures of me and paused so I could pose for some pictures I wasn’t a complete dick.
After a minute, Derek helped me get out of the hands of the paparazzi and towards the party room.
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....