Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 269
Chapter 0269
The line for the front desk, which stretched from side to side, was huge.
“We are going to be here forever,” Nan complained.
I glanced at the time. It was only 1 pm.
“We have plenty of time,” 1 told her. “The dinner doesn’t start until 6.”
In the itinerary that Alpha Levi sent me, it mentioned a competitor’s dinner at 6 tonight so we can get to know the other competitors and the judges. I had to admit, I was a bit nervous to see who I was up against.
Surprisingly, the line didn’t last forever. We only had to wait about 20 minutes before we were at the front of the line. One of the workers waved me over and I quickly hurried towards her with Nan in tow.
“Hello, are you checking in?” The woman, according to her nametag, Stacy, said.
“Yes. It should be under Judy Montague.”
She nodded and typed something into the computer.
“Oh, you’re here for the Gamma competition?” She asked.
“Yes,” I replied. I shouldn’t have been surprised that this resort was a shifter–owned resort. I didn’t smell any humans and there were a lot of people with Gamma sweatshirts and other gear. Very intimidating–looking people.
She typed something else into the computer.
“Lycan Chairmen has everything set up,” she explained as she continued to type stuff into her computer. But then she froze and glanced up at me, and then at Nan. “Except the room was for one. Is she staying with you as well?”
I flushed; I hadn’t thought about telling the hotel, or Alpha Levi, that Nan was coming with me. I felt stupid for not clearing it with them first.
“Uh, yes. But she can just share my bed,” I said quickly, hoping that was enough to clear things up. She looked between the two of us questionably, as if she was trying to gure out if she should allow it or not. But then a presence appeared beside me and my entire body froze as I looked up at the powerful–looking man that I had only seen briefly in the past.
“How about we upgrade her room then?” Beta Ron, Levi’s Beta, said, his eyes narrowed.
Stacy’s eyes widened at his request.
“I’m afraid we are all booked up…” she told him, her voice nervous.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....