Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 232
Chapter 0232
Judy’s POV
horror in his
Chester stared at me with a shocked expression, his mouth practically on the ground. I could see the eyes, and it made me look away from him again. I didn’t want him to feel bad for me, but I also wanted to be honest with him about everything. It seemed he was struggling with his own feelings and coming to terms that he found his mate… he didn’t want to say it out loud, but I knew that’s what was bothering him. It’s bothering Nan too and my heart was torn between the two of them.
I wanted them both to be happy and I knew that if they gave one another a proper chance, they could make each other happy. But they both seemed frightened over the idea of having a mate… or maybe Nan was frightened of the idea of having Chester as a mate. Her first couple of impressions of him weren’t great.
The first step was that they both needed to admit that they were mates, if not to me, then to each other. They needed to talk about it and figure out what to do from there
“Irene?” Chester asked, leaning against the counter again as if he couldn’t support his own weight. “Wait… your mate is Ethan Cash? From the Cash family?”
I wasn’t surprised that he knew Ethan’s name. Everybody knew Ethan’s name. His family was famous around the wolf territory; not as famous as Gavin, but they were well known. Even more, now that he was marrying Irene, the most famous heiress in the world.
1 nodded.
“Yes,” I replied. “The one and only. He left me to be with trene. I can’t really blame him… but it took a toll on me and my wolf.”
“Well, yeah. I mean, he’s your mate. That can’t be easy… seeing him with another and
His voice trailed off and I could see the utter horror in his eyes; his face had gone pale again, just as it did last night. I waved my hand in front of his face, trying to bring his attention back to me.
“Hey… what are you thinking about?” I asked him, my voice dropping to a compassionate whisper.
“I…” he started to say, but then he froze.
“Chester?” I asked, urging him to continue.
His eyes finally found mine and I could see the remorse in them.
“I hurt her, Judy,” he told me softly.
I wanted to put him out of his misery, so I sighed and leaned back in my seat.
“She’s your mate, isn’t she?”
He looked shocked that I knew such information, but then He sighed and nodded.
“Yes,” he whispered. “I saw her the other day when I was taking this girl Becky out on a date. I was in such shock that day that I wasn’t sure what to do. I didn’t want to ditch Becky, but Nan was standing in front of me with this hurt expression after realizing that I was taking Becky on a date….”
I winced; it was no wonder Nan was so upset and got drunk during that party. I wished she could have told me about this sober. It hurt that she didn’t; I was supposed to be her best friend and yet she couldn’t talk to me about something this important.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....