Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 224
Chapter 0224
“Is Judy still here?”
“I think she was going to the bathroom and then leaving,” he replied with a shrug. “Any more questions or can I return to my room?” He asked bitterly.
She rolled her eyes and gestured for him to leave. The second his bedroom door closed behind him, Irene ran out of her room and down the stairs. She hadn’t seen her father in a while either because he had been busy trying to get those stories pulled. She walked around the corner and was about to head towards the bathroom, but the sounds of breathy moans hit her ears, making her pause entirely. Her eyes narrowed and she hid around the corner, trying to get a glimpse of what could be happening.
Her jaw nearly dropped when she saw her father pressing Judy against the wall, his lips covering hers in what looked like an intimate kiss. Of course, Irene knew there was a possibility they could be fooling around with one another, but seeing it was something entirely new.
Judy was seriously such a whore. It was obvious she was only using Gavin so she could get close to Ethan.
Ethan pretty much said as much and Irene trusted Ethan more than anything in this world. Judy had always been like this; she was a flirt and cheated on Ethan… her own mate!
There was no way Irene was going to let this bitch get away with having her way with her father, only to break his heart in the end.
Judy let out another breathy moan just as Gavin lifted her up and she wrapped her legs around his waist. Irene felt sick to her stomach at the sight of them together and she knew she was going to have to do something to break them up and keep him away from her for the night.
She tiptoed down the hallway and back towards the foyer, pleased that there wasn’t anyone around considering it was later in the evening. Most of the staff had returned to their rooms; only some of the guards were awake and they mainly focused on patrolling the outside area.
Irene walked halfway up the stairs, took a deep breath, and then allowed her body to go limp and tumble down the rest of the stairs. It didn’t hurt much because it wasn’t a far fall, but she let out a blood- curdling scream as she fell. She landed on her arms which protected her from hurting herself too badly. She was a little bruised, but nothing that wouldn’t heal overnight.
Irene was good at crying on the spot; she’d used that ability a lot growing up. She grabbed her leg, which didn’t hurt at all, and she continued to whale and scream on the ground. Guards rushed into the room; their
eyes wide with alarm. Seconds later, her father ran into the room, His eyes were wild, and he looked disheveled.
“Irene?” He asked, rushing towards her. “What happened?
“I fell down the stairs,” she cried, tears streaking down her cheeks.
Beta Taylor walked into the foyer with a frown.
“Woah, everything okay?”
Gavin dismissed him with a hand wave.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....