Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 200
Chapter 0200
Judy’s POV
“Ethan is such a jerk,” Nan huffed as we walked to the student lounge. It was the next day after my encounter with Irene and I had just finished telling Nan about the entire ordeal. She was aggravated on my behalf, I was just hurt and confused. Gavin hadn’t reached out to me since last night and it was almost nearing evening currently.
Actually, he did text me earlier. But it was only to tell me that Matt wasn’t feeling well and that he wasn’t going to come to tutoring today. He also made it a point to tell me that he wasn’t coming over tonight. It wasn’t surprising; I wasn’t really expecting him to.
“Yeah, well, Irene is hopelessly in love with him. I’m assuming she took him back,” I murmured, shaking my head. “It’s whatever. It’s not my problem anymore.”
“Doesn’t it still hurt though?” Nan asked with a frown “I mean, he’s your mate and all…
I shook my head and bit my lower lip.
“That’s not the part that hurt the most,” I murmured. “I’m used to Ethan hurting me and my wolf. It’s not new to either of us. It hurts less and less each time though. I don’t love him anymore, despite him being my mate.”
Nan nodded thoughtfully.
“We need to get our minds off stupid guys,” Nan said, facing me. We had just reached the student lounge. We hadn’t gone inside yet though; her eyes were wide with excitement. “I heard there’s going to be a frat party tonight!‘
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“A frat party?” I asked, raising my brows. “Seriously, Nan?”
She nodded happily as she opened the door. I stepped in and she followed after me, looping through mine.
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“Everybody is going to be there. I have tonight off from work, and I really want to get out and have some fun. So, I was thinking we should go to this party,” she told me, a wide grin spreading across her face.
I sighed and shook my head. Parties were not my thing, especially frat parties. I would have rather stay in the combat center for a little longer tonight and get some training done.
“Oh, come on, Judy!” Nan pleaded. “We never get to do anything. This is going to be so fun, and you need a night out to forget about Ethan and Gavin.”
I sighed, I knew she was right. It could be a good thing to get out for a little bit and maybe loosen up. “Okay,” I finally relented. “We will go to this party. It’s not like I have anything better to do anyways.”
She squealed and wrapped her arms around me in a tight hug.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...